Reviews for Gateway to heaven |
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![]() ![]() hm...poor goku...i wonder how this will turn out...very interesting...please write more soon : |
![]() ![]() Wat?Last chapt! |
![]() ![]() Yes pls continue... I would like to know what that $%* (opps pardon me for my language hehe...) Li Tou Ten had up his evil sleeve...sheesh... It also nice to see Homura and Sanzo Ikko made peace too... xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay, this is getting good. _ I like a Sanzoo who doesn't show his feelings... Umm... As he usually doesn't, so I like him all the time! Need more Goku! |
![]() ![]() Oh!Homura and Sanzo are so out-of-character!Earnest?Sanzo earnest?But never mind, keep up the good work and continue ! |
![]() ![]() Lazy alert! *sheepish grin* Anyway,... only one comment... I'm not so used to Homura being...so... you know... ;; Haha! Continue! -M-i- |
![]() ![]() I know I'm a bit late but I'll review anyway.I love the way you write!Your style of writing is jz my type! |
![]() ![]() ![]() 5! Oh! Good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() COL! keep writing! I'm waiting! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Mwa ha ha ha ha! Well, what didja expect! Eggtart does that to people. Beware of what they can do to you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() STUPID LI TOUTEN! *kicks him* |
![]() ![]() Gemi: Aaa... isnt it a wonderful view? (points to a group of Goku fans torturing Li Tou Ten) Libi: Yup. Gemi: Update soon, looking forward for one (smile) n_n Libi: (join the group when she remembered him saying he didnt mean to force his nataku being a toushin taishi) Luv it, like it, so continue it! |
![]() ![]() i really dont understand that part... how can just one bump on the head affect goku that badly and where did the bat come from? Yare yare! tonikaku, cant wait for the next chapter to appear! Sore ja ne! |
![]() ![]() Very Nice! Keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Woooo... this is starting to get a twist *grin* wonder if Nataku has a part in the whole thing.. And Goku's visions of the three('blonde guy and co. fighting a 'blue and gold eyed guy'...), was that a flashback or currently happening cuz i think its a flashback... though i just remembered Sanzo calling for Homura and who knows what's happening ;; Ack! Anyway, don't forget the golden word. CONTINUE. bai bai! -M-i- |