Next drabble, please!

Oh noooo, what are you doing to me?! My heart, this is just too much. I must say, I don't even remember what Don did in that particular episode before I read the chapter. And I was like 'Did Don do or say something to Mikey that was bad?' But it was his whole revenge part with that mobster guy, wasn't a fan of that arc either I must say.
But I'm always game for drabbles like this, and overprotective Donnie!

The first part of the story started to perfectly, and so much fluff. YOu could really see how much they all cared for each other. And I especially loved how gentle they were with Mikey. They were, of course, joking about things but they were obviously worried out of their minds.
But then it all went to hell when when they started talking about the runt part. I actually didn't even know that, I also thought runt was... well what Raph thought it was basically. So at first I was also confused why Don thought it was such a big deal. Though that made it even more powerful when Don explained, so major kudos on that part.

My favourite part for sure was when Raph seemed to realise what he had been saying to Mikey, or how worried both Leo and Raph were, asking about the consequences on Mikey even now. But it only made the last sentence so much worse! Raph realises what he had said, and now Mikey has started to believe he's truly the runt of the family aaarrgh why must you torture me with these perfectly written drabbles. It's not even dramatic that last sentence, and yet, it means so much. I can't.

In general, you wrote Raph's side really well. He's certainly not the bully like you mention, and it really makes you think about your words a bit better. Sorry to hear that happened to you, but I'm glad you both figured it out.

Again, major kudos on this drabble littl big sis!

See ya!

Hi! You're back! I haven't seen anything from you in ages and ages! And this... this is beautiful. This touches my heart. I love it when an author really makes me feel for Leo, because I do relate to him, and sometimes it seems to be forgotten that he is really still a child. He has a lot of responsibility on his young shoulders. This was sad, but quite lovely. Thank you!

Amazing, beautiful and heartbraking. It was a wonderful chapter. Brought tears to my eyes. So emotional. I think you are one of those few but rare writers, those incredible people, who can well and thouroughly describe and asses the four brothers, especially Leo. It is amazing how well you can portray him and show off his emotions and internal turmoil so accurately. This particular chapter just screamed Leonardo, something not many can do. You kept him in character, wrote what we all think really goes on in his mind. That is amazing, truly a gift. I loved this chapter, it was a masterpiece of its own kind.

Awww! I just loved this!

Wow!... that's all I have to say.. just wow. This was so beautiful, just so incredibly beautiful. I so loved it! At first I was quite confused actually, not really knowing who had captured Mikey, and on top of that, I didn't even know for sure that it was Mikey. It could've been Raph for all I know. Don't know if I should be happy it turned out to be Mikey xD But by now it's pretty obvious we like seeing out favorite character suffer :3

And boy, he did suffer :( At first I was confused, like I said, I didn't know who had captured him. From the AN at the top I thought it was a villain from season 4, but later when Mikey started talking about Master Splinter, and he never mentioned his death I quickly figured it wasn't season 4. For which I'm actually grateful, because I do not like Splinter being dead :( But that doesn't take away the horrible things they've done to Mikey.

Turning up the heat.. that is maybe worse than physical torture at that time. Because heat definitely can't be good for cold-blooded animals. And by the sound of it, Mikey really wasn't doing well, and on top of that they only refused to give him water when he didn't answer the questions, or they decreased the amount of water. Though I love the little touch about not wanting to be silenced, and struggling out of the chain even to the point of it becoming infected. It shows that Mikey really isn't a pushover, like the show often displays him. but it was sad, because cracking jokes was basically the only thing he could do.

It was so sad actually that Mikey remembered the 'good days' so to speak. Not like I can blame him. he was cpatured for god knows how long, of course he'd be thinking of his family. And it's probably the only way for him to keep sane. Knowing that his brothers are looking for him, and that he has someone who loves him at home. But at the same time it makes the situation harder. Missing someone so badly. And thank you for rescuing him!

That scene was so heartbreaking, Mikey was so out of it, just so fragile back then. The way he begged for more water, and how he said that even though it tasted horrible, it was still the best thing in the world. I mean, it was even better than pizza! I just loved how gentle his brothers were once they found out the state Mikey was in, and how fragile he had become during his capture. My favorite part by far was when Raph was wetting Mikey's lips. That was just so cute, to see how gentle Raph was. And I love how you included how much Mikey cherished the water, when the water was spilled and all.

Which actually means a lot considering how cute the scene with the four of them actually was. Of course Mikey wouldn't blame Donnie for giving him water. After all, it's understandable for Donnie not to know what to do. He isn't a trained doctor. I think that giving him a bit of water was the best thing to do, putting his body through all that stress wouldn't have been good either way.

And hey hey! What did I say about self-doubting?! Well I guess you're right this time, not being sure about the ending, if you consider the AN the ending! This was amazing! Truly amazing.
No need for the AN, because to me it was an awesome ending. And I can't be the only one who is looking forward to that scene. *hint hint* xD Or another drabble about this, I'm already obsessed with this one, seriously it was so awesome. And I think you already get my point so I'm just gonna shut up right now xD

Loved the 5k monster sis!

See ya!

Aw! So amazing! The Classic Mikey ending was just fine; a solemn, meaningful fic with a bright, childish ending. Perfect.
-Cx3
(A muse is such an untamable thing, isn't it?)

Absolutely amazing! I loved it, especially the memory of the water fight. You've definitely out done yourself this time! Definitely can't wait for more!

Oh man, this was really good sis! (And it looks like I got the message across, no AN about not being satisfied with the one-shot/drabble ). I haven't really thought about this, but it's something they've surely gone through. All alone in the woods, having to run away from your own father's clan (and the very person who is your arch enemy and can easily be killed right now), and not being able to get some food anywhere, since they aren't in the city, or even in the right time.

leo was quite cranky about the whole situation, which was kinda hilarous actually xD Seeing the mostly calm leader lose it. But also pretty understandable, not like I have experience with travelling through time, but you know what I mean hopefully xD Leo just wants his brothers to be save, he just wants to bring them home safely.

I also like the little throwback to the forest in the first half of season 3, it really shows how Mikey learned to get along with nature (Like your last drabble). And then came the chase... yup.. At first it was really fun (and fun to read) they were just four teenagers running after a rabbit, and it reminded me of those games we used to play as kids (Don't even know the rules, but I sure remember it was hectic :P). But it was all fun and games at first. Leo falling into the dirt, which was by the way very very hilarious to read!, but then they caught the rabbit. And welll...

Let's just say I would've had the same reaction as Mikey had. Sure I eat meat, and I know how it came to be, but killing an actual animal? I wouldn't be able to do that, and while they did lose their dinner, I can't really blame Mikey. I'm glad Don understood, and I guess Raph understood it too, he was just frustrated by the loss of food.

Hmmmm don't know what the last line means... apart from the fact that they witness the death of their mother etc. But that seems a bit too obvious xD Oh well :3

Aboslutely loved this sis!

See ya!

Aw, this was adorable! This chapter was Mikey teough and through, especially when he lets the rabbit go. I love how you show that Mikey knows his brothers' levels of irritation just by looking at them and their behavior. Nicley written :)

This was really good. I figured Mikey wouldn't have let the rabbit die, freeing it and going hungry over killing it so he could eat is such a younger sibling thing to do.

Great job as always, looking forward to more!

Oh boy, this is waaayy too late. I'm just really busy lately. But here it is nevertheless!

I was already realy excited/scared when I saw where it was based on. That episode... it is by far the most emotional episode so far, and probably even the best in this series (or a very proud second best episode) And the feels where just over the top here, And you could just .. feel it with this chapter/drabble.

For some weird reason I didn't even want to read this drabble. Because I was sure you were going to add something very very emotional, and since I was already literally holding my breath, I was pretty scared to read this drabble xD And for some reason, I was hoping you'd let Shen life in this drabble, or transport her back to the future, or at least save Miwa D':

Though I really loved how you included the vision quest episode in this. it was the most hyped episode at that time after all... but apart from Leo's outfit, and Raph's in future episode(s). We've never seen or heard anything from that episode really. Of course Leo got healed, and MIkey concentrates.. a bit better.. but nothing really big happened. So I'm glad you included how the episode affected them.

Can't lie... I was already holding my breath when Shen died, I mean they showed death.. on screen. And I know it's a cartoon, but I was literally staring at the screen, and my heart definitely wasn't ready. I was so wrong, the way you described it... her injuries and Mikey and Don finding her injured and almost dying body... that was just heartbreaking because we know how Yoshi reacts to losing his wife and children. And I still had hope they'd let her live, or you would let her live.

And for a second I really believed you'd let her live. When she was still alive. Leo tried to rescue her, I know he really did, and in the end he couldn't save her at all. First of all there was the collapsing building, and he had to make a choice. But most importantly, Yoshi wouldn't have gone to NY if Shen was still alive. And who would've stopped the Kraang from taking over the earth then? But still... I can't imagine how Leo must be feeling, knowing he let his 'mom' die.

Despite the gruesome nature of it, I liked how Renet stated what would've happened otherwise. With them being regular turtles, and the Kraang indeed taking over the earth and Miwa still mutating. And I totally agree with Raph though... all that time travel is making my head hurt. And it looks like you're on my side sis :D

And I can't be the only one who thinks that this episode deserves a proper ending? With them reuniting with Yoshi..? *hint hint* xD

See ya sis!

Ah ha! I finally read it as promised! I liked this a lot! It's always fun to read what we watch. I like books better than movies so it's cool to see it in writing form! Also you add your own little mix to it which is great! I love your writing so much! It's always so wonderfully done! I saw little grammatical errors which is always a bravo! A feat I myself struggle to accomplish D; I also love just being inside their heads. It gives the reader so much more! I feel so awful for Leo, poor guy having to make a decision like that. I mean thinking about it myself that'd be hard. If you save someone who means a lot to you, it'd change history and it'd change everyone's life. So you can't no matter how much you want to. Poor guy, he did the right thing.
ANYWAY loved this, loved you. I shall try to review more :( I apologize for being busy! Life's just crazy, as you already know c: Toodles!

I really love this! I'm so glad we got to see what happens when the cameras aren't rolling in the turtles. It's nice reading their emotions.

I have a request, (which you don't even have to consider), but in the same episode, Tales of Yokai, Mikey mentions that they've been in the forest for a few days and barely eating anything good. I was hoping you would write a story about their life in the foods for those few days, how they interActed witch each other, sleeping arrangements and what they ate! Just an idea, please ignore if you don't even do requests.

Looking forward to your next Drabble :)

Another great story, great job. I agree too that time travel is frustrating. Still, great job as always and can't wait for the next!