| Reviews for Vicki Plus One |
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   MegaDarkly chapter 1 . 7/8 I agree with Retnuh's review. Story wasn't bad. Out of character, naturally, but wasn't bad. I enjoyed reading it. it wasn't a chore to read. Thanks for the read. |
| Guest chapter 4 . 6/13 I loved the contrast you made between Timmy and his parents(I am going to use this term loosely because parents are the people who raised you and actually care about you, not the ones who conceived you): Timmy is a teenager, who happens to be the real adult there mentally speaking, because he not only took care of his responsibilities, but also is there for his daughter, unlike his parents, who are kids with massive entitlement issues on adult bodies and very neglectful parents. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/17 (If you watch Pirates of the Caribbean, you'll know what I mean) I read your fic and it is an amazing story. Also, anytime I read a fic about this pairing, I can't avoid getting some serious Calypso/Davy Jones vibes. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/10 Ke |
| Guest chapter 4 . 4/10 Jt |
| retnuh1000 chapter 12 . 3/12/2019 I enjoyed this story, but I'm really dissatisfied with its ending. Chapter 11 was a great place to end it. The leading couple got a tender moment together, Vicki's insecurities about the relationship were cleared up, and it was left open as to whether or not they would have another child. Chapter 12 makes the story feel unfinished. Hell, chapter 12 feels unfinished. The final line reads like the punchline of a joke that noone understands. Its like you passed the finish line, kept running for another 50 feet, and then tripped before declaring "Screw it, this is the finish line now." |
| Oriana Star chapter 12 . 8/24/2018 It is a very interesting story! Great couple! |
| cloudsdancethestars chapter 12 . 3/3/2018 *Clap* *Clap* *Clap* Well done, Well done indeed |
| elole chapter 12 . 2/11/2018 i feel like i need an epilogue of after the baby comes or the experiencing the pregnancy together. |
| elole chapter 11 . 2/11/2018 aw poor hope missing her mommy. god i love this fic |
| elole chapter 10 . 2/11/2018 oh my god. you killed me. the fluff and mix of seriousness was to much. and timmy is a smooth mother fucker. lol get it. |
| elole chapter 8 . 2/11/2018 lool timmy. Finally they got somewhere instead of running in circles. love the chapter |
| elole chapter 7 . 2/11/2018 hope is such a cockblock. or kiss block in this sitch. i love her |
| elole chapter 6 . 2/11/2018 Lol that ending tho. great chapter |
| elole chapter 5 . 2/11/2018 Oh shit, things getting real all of a sudden. Love it though. Especially Vicky. |
