.THIS! Omg, my ship of Storm and Ella is beginning to regain hope. The story is soo beautifly plotted, and its soooooo amazinga!

Great story plot but like Lana said, the story is a bit off key. Also, the speech structure really annoys me. There should always be a new line for each spoken part. Its really confusing to read if you dont separate the speech and makes it boring to read, I gave up after 30 seconds. It also kind of annoyed me how Ella's name wasn't Nashi, but oh well. I don't think I'll be reading this, but as advice, do as Lana said and check out The Keys Of Fire. It was my absolute favourite fanfiction ever and I adore it.

Hello. I really like the story line and everything, but it seems like you barely know the anime/manga. This is basically a future version of Fairy Tail, which means two things don't make sense in this story.

1. After the Nirvana arc, Wendy and the rest of Fairy Tail found out that Cait Shelter was only a projection. Therefore, it makes no sense to have Cait Shelter in here, as Cait Shelter would not exist at this point.

2. Natsu and Lucy don't have kids when the 7th guild master is appointed- Erza Scarlet.

Bonus fact- Natsu and Lucy end up having a daughter named Nashi.

I also find that you have several spelling errors. It is best to re-read everything BEFORE you publish the chapter.

Also, the paragraphs are WAYYYY to long. There should not be more than one talking sentence in a paragraph. The format is also a little off, too. For a good example of a nice text layout, check out The Keys of Fire by LoneStorm. Just read it anyways. It's awesome.

M Mature Audiences: explicit, sexual or graphic content.
T For Teen Audiences
K For Kids