Love this story!

Cute! :) I hope her and Otto work things out soon, I like their close bond. Update soon :D

That was a little bit to much, Harley.
Oh oh, Otto knew.
But I dont think he will hurt his own daughter, so Jax will be beaten, but not killed.

So please more :)

O.o ...

Great story! I just love their dedication to each other. I can't wait until Otto finds out!

Daaaaaaammmmmmnnnnnnnnnn...

Nice work on the update.

Im sad.
I love my Koz and I really really like him with Harley.
But I have the the other Story to read, if I need my fix. :)

I love Jax too, so I can live with this part. ;)

So, please more.

Can you not split them up please just keep them together forever and you could follow the show like you do with Jax and Lelia but also add your own elements like an AU of the show. Please consider this if you have ever read charmings worst kept secret that would be awesome thank you

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Can't wait to read more. Love Harley and Jaxs.

Jax and Harley are so cute together. Can't wait to see what happens. You could spin the story with involving tara. Maybe make her try and confront Harley or JAX to make him go with her again or in the future when tara comes back have that extra bit of drama with tara.

I'm curious if you will have JAX still have Abel without Harley? Or if she will be the one pregnant? I don't think I read an OC story where the character made was the one to mother Abel themselves? Opposed to raising abel as their own son? So that will be interesting to see how you develop that aspect of the story.

One thing I really despised about tara and jax's relationship was the fighting over leaving the club. They really were forcing themselves together when they should have pursued their dreams how life intended it for them instead of trying to stay together and being miserable. Their relationship was toxic and so unhealthy. Your OC is already so much of a better fit and their dreams complement one another.

Another thing was about college.. Obviously she doesn't want to pursue a career but I was raised where my parents always wanted me to have something to fall back on. She can get any degree she liked so she could support herself if it didn't work out with JAX, or if they have rough patches to work out. Plus, she could go to a school that is close to home or even online school part time. Chemistry sucks for everyone lol even people who are good at it. I just think if she did this it could add to the story and the stress of the character showing the troubles they push through to remain together. Maybe even a business degree since she helps Gemma.

Before I start sounding like a guidance counselor I am moving on lol I would love to see the dynamic between your OC and Gemma as well as the rest of the club. Does gemma intimidate her etc? Or does she know that she is dating JAX? Or approves?

Finally hopefully it doesn't blow up in their faces if they are caught together before telling Otto. Can't wait to see how you make the big reveal .

Thanks for posting !

Well, fantastic start. Looking forward to seeing where you take it.

loved the beginning ! :)