white sheep jaune arc dies by percy's hand after findng out about his 'harem'?

you know a piece of heaven goes really with them realizing shin'en rigged the map

Percys fucking triggered

the sarcasm must ooze from him

I'm trying to like percy but he's such an ass not even a little bit of character growth he's just plain asshole. I enjoyed the beggining but seriously he's so annoying to read about I'm currently only reading out of BOREDOM and to see how he'll eventually be overpowered and all that jazz seriously at this point it's so predictable and BORING the fact that I'm typing this message is out BOREDOM AND ANGER. Anyway whatever you already finished this story feel free to ignore or take offence it doesn't even matter again I'm just typing down my thoughts because im bored.

you are gonna put a kid that's stronger than the village elite jonin in the academy? this makes absolutely no sense

The leviathan Zuzu behemoth idea is awesome go for it

nice

Went back for a re-read after a long time, not gonna lie forgot the ending and cried a little. Still one of the best stories I have ever read.

You try to hard to make your characters emo a six year old wouldn’t react like that

After both eyes have evolved to Mangekyou, Susano'o is there for good.

Whatever shin'en is feeling about persephone I won't accept it be is clearly being manipulated into feeling this way

Dude this is about to become cliche... I swear if shin'ne is stopped becomes his sister says she loves and cares for him then that just means he is an overpowered child throwing and tantrum ...if this story turns into redemption fanfic thaaaaan I'm not reading this story anymore... Hagoromo about to give Naruko and Sasuke his power when they should have gotten six paths power for their fight against kaguya is another issue ...please make Shin'ne aware that forces are influencing him... I REALLY love your story man but I can't handle a full 180 in character personality change when he clearly doesn't want anything to do with his sister considering whatever he feels for her is the fates influence trying to ground him in his home dimension

Dude I love this story but fuuuuuuuuuck can we not have Shin'en be subtly influenced? I mean it pretty much makes everything up to now pointless if he were to just up and change simply because susano'o is influencing him to care

Ngl, bitching him like you did pissed me off and I stopped reading.