i would definitely read the pirate dream as a stand alone fic

I’ve just finished reading your story and I have to tell you it is one of the best pieces of FanFiction I have ever read. I’m sorry to hear about all the things that happened to you. But I am so happy to hear you are over coming them. Congratulations on an amazing story!

Are they at the Burrow? Or at Hogwarts? I'm sorry I'm bit confused

So I love this story and I just wanted to point out there are some formatting issues in this chapter. There seem to be tags missing as to who is saying what when new people enter a scene. There are lines broken apart oddly. It made it a bit hard to follow. But, beside that, this is amazing!

Wow. I love the grown-up versions. I love this fic, weirdly. (I've mentioned that I rarely love the adulty stories? This, Ann Bishop's Others series, and maybe like two others. Sometimes I like them, but I LOVE this.)

Gods. What happened to you. I can't imagine being in that situation. (Especially with a guy who looks like Fred, because guess who else does? My awesome uncle and my sweet little brother. Grown-up Fred and kid Fred. So, uh...I won't say this story wasn't a smidge weird, but ok.)

Lots of people are killed in kids' stories. It's just that they don't have names. Like Avatar: The Last Airbender. The pacifist airbender, Aang, kills so many nameless soldiers- then balks at killing the Big Bad. Wth? They're still people, idiot Avatar.

...yes, I checked the word count, and this is about twice as long as my novel. It's a book. It counts.

The ending does not feel rushed. How do you do that? My endings always feel rushed.

And all that to say...
Loved the story an irrational amount. Going to go read your Jily one now. Let me know if you ever publish a book that I can buy, even if it's 'adulty.'

You're awesome. Don't forget that.
~Alyce

No. You DID NOT JUST KILL TESS. You DID NOT.

I wanna see this Zutara. Even if it's M.

I am still in surprise at the fact that you're a good enough writer I'm on chapter freaking 57 of a freaking M-rated fic. Do you know how often I read that far in M stories? Exactly once.

My sister almost my age knows about my fanfiction. My littler sister does not, and I would like to keep it that way for the foreseeable future. Maybe it's just me being an overprotective older sister, but I think a fair bit of what I read may be slightly inappropriate for her. (This definitely is.)

Sidenote: my siblings and I are all obsessed with grammar and logic. My brother logics the heck out of stories that are not even SUPPOSED to have logic- like fairy tales.

A cannon is a big gun that you often see in pirate movies. Canon, single n, is the author-confirmed events in a story. Just wanted to get that out there. :)

Little sisters are the best, yeah? Mine's my first reader for my novel, and I swear sometimes knows more about my world and what's supposed to happen than I do.

Go read Mythcreants if you haven't done so already. They have multiple articles involving rape culture and how, if we want people to stop thinking rape is OK IRL, we as writers have to stop making it OK in our stories. I am so proud of you for making it very clearly NOT OK, and if any of my stories ever touch on the topic it will be just as clearly NOT OK.

People say "it's just fiction," but fiction is how kids learn. Kids learn to empathize by reading. If they read white boys, that's who they'll empathize with. If they read black girls, they'll empathize with black girls. Same for straight or gay, cis or trans characters. And if kids read stories where rape is a-ok...then even if *they* never actually harass or rape anyone, they won't judge people who *do* as harshly. And that is Not Okay.

(Sorry for the rant/s. But...let me know if you write a book. I'm pretty sure it'd be good.)

Oh THAT'S why it's rated M! For Map!

Or how about this scenario?
Mathbook: "Explain how you arrived at the answer."
Me: Well...because two and two...if you put them together you get four...because one, two, three, four...and one and two are one two...and three and four are the other two...so two and two equals four!
Mathbook: "No, two and two equals seven."
Me: ...if you say so.

Two reviews on one M story. That's two more than all my other reviews on M-rated stories combined. Wow, I guess I really like this thing.

I do not usually review M-rated stories. That said, this is wonderful and amazing and did I mention it's epic? I love this chapter so much. Umbridge deserves All The Sweets. Aren't the twins so kind? Sweets for the sweet, after all. *viciously innocent grin*

Also, I love Kara, she is currently my favorite of your OCs.

I swear if you’re about to kill Fred I’m gonna be SO fucking mad aaaaaaaaah