If you put girls like Albedo from Overlord in the story then why isn't she Jaune lover right now?! You can never go wrong if you chose her for the MC lover...

Fire Emblem Path of Radiance/radiant dawn and Akame ga kill

I’m really interested in the way this story is developing.

Please keep going!

it's good... really good. I like it. keep up the good work.

Zeus?

Dude, are you dead?

Damn this is an awesome story! Sad to see no updates in a couple years though!

Big bad wolf or boy who cried wolf or something wolf related.

I liked reading this and not just because it helped fuel my addiction to dragonslayer. It's an interesting concept one I haven't seen yet but was sure would be done (because why not have jaune with super speed, strength, illusions, glyphs, etc.). Top that off with adding depth and build up to the interactions (bless your 20k chapters) and you have a rly enjoyable (and hot if you go read the lemons) fic.

I can only hope you continue this, but till then you'll have my fav and follow to notify me when it happens.

Thanks for the read!

Muy buena... te felicito es un muy buen fic.

The uncensored version is hot as hell. Looking forward to see where you go from here.

PLEASE update

This is such a great story! Please, continue! It's so great!

I keep coming back to check if the story has been updated. I love the idea and like when Jaune is op. Please update again. Sorry bout the lack of constructive criticism but as of writing this review I'm working on zero sleep and a dying phone.

the dialogue was so shitty. as if paid actors were reading a third rate script

Not that I don't mine a story that has Jaune pair up with Nora (finally), but I think I would have preferred having Nora and Ren have a brother sister relationship, not this poly nonsense.