Reviews for Unexpected Surprise
Soni rose Amelia the hedgehog chapter 1 . 7/21
Good
loowhoa chapter 8 . 7/7
I’m sorry but this is like really bothering me how the ragging on Adrian about not being there and not knowing about the father anything and stuff look on the thing I totally understand but the whole father thing he didn’t know no one told him no one even think to told him about anything and it’s like really bothering me
But this is a really good story I really love it I’m not trying to like bring a dollar thing but it’s just a little thing that’s just been bothering me
loowhoa chapter 7 . 7/7
Now that I think about it why didn’t they tell Adrian that Marinette was pregnant if they are as good as friends as they claim why did they think to include him into the loop or mention anything about Emma at all was it because that he’s gone that they didn’t consider him as good as a friend anymore and what was up with Nina ragging on him about oh are you blaming us are you blaming us literally all he was saying was that he did not know what is up with people not telling Adriien anything
Anna Sukey chapter 1 . 6/24
Hey Adrien

I love you Adrien
introvertedlover2 chapter 11 . 6/12
"if you do screw this one up, you'll find yourself with a new sister" omfg XD
lanalight1 chapter 14 . 6/5
I may or may not have neglected all of my schoolwork to read this today. 10000000% WORTH IT. Your writing is absolutely amazing and I'm so sad I'm already done reading this. Stories like this are hard to get over because now I'll have to get used to the fact that Emma Agreste isn't a real character in the show *cries*
OreokingMEGA chapter 14 . 5/11
I just want to say something, props to you Chocoluck chips. When the first CHAPTER of this story was published I'm pretty sure only 4 or 5 episodes of the first season had aired. Even with three entire seasons I am unable to write something so fantastic. I'm amazed by this
Guest chapter 14 . 5/3
cute
Guest chapter 4 . 5/3
oh my god, a human gabriel? this must be a dream lol, i love this side of him tho its cute
VioletLites chapter 14 . 3/31
This was lovely. I really enjoyed it all the way through. You managed to pack so much in. Thank you for writing it and sharing. Have a great day!
ShadowAngel100 chapter 14 . 2/17
Adorable!
miriamjerez29 chapter 14 . 1/14
i haven't reviewed a story in over 10 years but I wanted to take the time to praise you for this piece. It was beautifully written and well thought out. Thank you so much, fanfiction was getting a little stale for me and your story had me captivated.
Alyce Reide chapter 1 . 1/11
Awww!
hubnnick chapter 14 . 1/7
So what happened to the new cat Noir and ladybug
Stormgate chapter 1 . 12/25/2019
I searched for so long to try and find this again. Thanks for the great read.
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