OMG this is so hot and wonderful. you can read the intensity and longing for each other. so satisfying.

Ooooooookay this was lovely...and steamy ;)

Hot, sweet and it's so great to see them so free. Wonderful. Thanks.

Beautiful, intense, poetic
I certainly hope this becomes a multi-chapter fic.

Thnx so much for posting this here...so sensual. I love reading your canon time line of banna. I'd like more back right after their xmas eve reunion or right after his prison release if u are so inclined!

This is good

I loved this when I saw it on Tumblr, and I'm so happy to see it again here. I found it very moving to read and I thought you handled the situation really well. Looking forward to reading more from you in the future.

I loved it when you posted it on Tumblr, and I love it now. So many gorgeous images and turns of phrase; I particularly loved the contrast between their initial frantic lovemaking and then the slower, more sensual kind later on. And we know that John Bates has the stamina to put any young man to shame! I love the way that you write the intimacy between them in the quiet moments of the afterglow, and you have so many evocative descriptions like Anna being like a "luminescent springtime nymph". Thank you so much for writing this piece!

This is just what was needed after the severe lack of Banna in the last episode.