Chapter 33
p dir"ltr" style"line-height: 1.38; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt; text-align: left;"span style"font-size: 9pt; font-family: Arial; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;"The now-returned buzz permeated through Club Wonderland. Now that things had kicked up again, people had regressed into expecting good shows not seen elsewhere. Week-to-week, it was once again a healthy establishment with a crowd most nights. /spanspan style"font-size: 9pt; font-family: Arial; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;"br /spanspan style"font-size: 9pt; font-family: Arial; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;"br /spanspan style"font-size: 9pt; font-family: Arial; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;"Though the promise was, once again, quite common, a special show was promised for tonight. That same promise had been fulfilled twenty times over, but it also never failed to impress the people that cared for quality. The excitement tempered once the lights dropped out, an the new female voice rang out over the speakers. /spanspan style"font-size: 9pt; font-family: Arial; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;"br /spanspan style"font-size: 9pt; font-family: Arial; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;"br /spanspan style"font-size: 9pt; font-family: Arial; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;""Ladies and… oh, who am I kidding, gentleman and gentleman!" The female voice was now far stronger and more confident than on the first day of reopening. Clover had since grown past the pains of operating a business such as Wonderland, and now spoke with the same sarcastic but pleased tone Queen used to. /spanspan style"font-size: 9pt; font-family: Arial; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;"br /spanspan style"font-size: 9pt; font-family: Arial; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;"br /spanspan style"font-size: 9pt; font-family: Arial; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;"The lights faded into a deep red, coating most of the club in a black as dark as raven feathers./spanspan style"font-size: 9pt; font-family: Arial; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;"br /spanspan style"font-size: 9pt; font-family: Arial; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;"br /spanspan style"font-size: 9pt; font-family: Arial; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;""Fun fact," Clover stated, "This is actually a secret show. I was asked to keep this little adventure quiet from the rest of the girls here at Wonderland. Why? I don't know. She just didn't want one of them to know she was here, so everyone thinks that this is just *another* one of the many girls we employ."/spanspan style"font-size: 9pt; font-family: Arial; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;"br /spanspan style"font-size: 9pt; font-family: Arial; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;"br /spanspan style"font-size: 9pt; font-family: Arial; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;"Raven Branwen felt a weird series of emotions that she had come to forget and ignore. It wasn't shame or cowardice, but it felt close enough to them. The reason, of course, is that the main reason she wanted to keep her show a secret from Club Wonderland's employees was that she knew her daughter worked there. Rather than take any chance at confronting Yang, she opted to do what she always did: watch from afar. /spanspan style"font-size: 9pt; font-family: Arial; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;"br /spanspan style"font-size: 9pt; font-family: Arial; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;"br /spanspan style"font-size: 9pt; font-family: Arial; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;""I guess the other employees don't need to know YOU specifically are coming on. Queen did tell me a lot of them had weirdly specific stipulations, but whatever. If you only have one show in you, I'm sure it won't be a problem."/spanspan style"font-size: 9pt; font-family: Arial; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;"br /spanspan style"font-size: 9pt; font-family: Arial; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;"br /spanspan style"font-size: 9pt; font-family: Arial; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;"For the first time in… a long, long time, Raven had regrets about leaving her daughter. It had been a long time since she had considered a world where she took Yang with her when she left, or worse, a life where she became a proper mother instead of a leader. Though she had long since pushed away any strong feelings of attachment, she was still a mother of a girl. The small part of her that still carried some maternal instinct… regretted that her decisions had led to her daughter becoming a stripper. That same daughter, following Summer's death, raised her step-daughter to be a stripper as well. Raven closed her eyes; it was too late to concern herself with that now, especially since it would make her a hypocrite considering where she was standing. /spanspan style"font-size: 9pt; font-family: Arial; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;"br /spanspan style"font-size: 9pt; font-family: Arial; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;"br /spanspan style"font-size: 9pt; font-family: Arial; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;""You know, you kind of look like… never mind, just talking to myself. Not my place, anyway."/spanspan style"font-size: 9pt; font-family: Arial; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;"br /spanspan style"font-size: 9pt; font-family: Arial; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;"br /spanspan style"font-size: 9pt; font-family: Arial; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;"Raven narrowed her eyes. She had been blessed with many things, youth being one of them. That said, that meant she looked quite similar to the daughter she'd rather not think about. This Clover girl managed to figure it out immediately, but thankfully, Yang wouldn't know her mother would share her stage. Why she was there? Well, the indirect comment on how young she still looked didn't hurt, but it was mainly for her own pleasures. /spanspan style"font-size: 9pt; font-family: Arial; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;"br /spanspan style"font-size: 9pt; font-family: Arial; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;"br /spanspan style"font-size: 9pt; font-family: Arial; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;""Yeah, yeah, that'd be fine. Nobody would complain, I'm sure. The whole thing is whatever the girl's all about or whatever, and that ought to be fine. I'm not exactly the best judge for what makes women attractive to men, but yeah, the obvious is obvious."/spanspan style"font-size: 9pt; font-family: Arial; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;"br /spanspan style"font-size: 9pt; font-family: Arial; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;"br /spanspan style"font-size: 9pt; font-family: Arial; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;"br /spanspan style"font-size: 9pt; font-family: Arial; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;"The lights fell and illuminated the curtains. It was a mix of deep reds and solid blacks, though nothing moved. Suddenly, another light turned on with a loud clunk. It pointed slight in front of the curtains. Several loud, continuous drops hit as more lights turned on, gradually illuminating the runway. Finally, one massive light lit up the proper stage./spanspan style"font-size: 9pt; font-family: Arial; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;"br /spanspan style"font-size: 9pt; font-family: Arial; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;"br /spanspan style"font-size: 9pt; font-family: Arial; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;""Now, to me," Raven thought to herself. Another thing she was blessed with was hard-earned skill, which she put into great use. Tonight's first talent became clear as the lights illuminated the main stage, bathing her with them. To the audience, she had merely appeared on the main stage with no movement, which wasn't quite wrong./spanspan style"font-size: 9pt; font-family: Arial; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;"br /spanspan style"font-size: 9pt; font-family: Arial; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;"br /spanspan style"font-size: 9pt; font-family: Arial; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;"Raven stood proud in the center of the stage. Having seemingly appeared from nowhere, she sat in the quiet admiration she could feel from those watching; she knew the feeling well, seeing as she had a tribe of people that knew her as what she really was. She had worked hard for her power, and deserved her attention. Now that she had it, she needed to prove why beyond parlor tricks. /spanspan style"font-size: 9pt; font-family: Arial; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;"br /spanspan style"font-size: 9pt; font-family: Arial; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;"br /spanspan style"font-size: 9pt; font-family: Arial; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;"The crowd felt a combination of excitement, surprise, and fear. The woman on stage cut a frightening figure, especially after she had appeared from the dark. Her hair was long, raven black, almost like feathers. She wore an eastern-style obi, the mountain-print sash wrapped around a loose top. Her red skirt was offset by a massive array of feathers gathered at her side. Opposite said feathers was a massive sheath for a weapon the crowd could only imagine. That, plus the gauntlets adorning her arms let them know the woman was a threat. /spanspan style"font-size: 9pt; font-family: Arial; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;"br /spanspan style"font-size: 9pt; font-family: Arial; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;"br /spanspan style"font-size: 9pt; font-family: Arial; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;"But that mask. /spanspan style"font-size: 9pt; font-family: Arial; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;"br /spanspan style"font-size: 9pt; font-family: Arial; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;"br /spanspan style"font-size: 9pt; font-family: Arial; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;"The woman wore a mask. /spanspan style"font-size: 9pt; font-family: Arial; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;"br /spanspan style"font-size: 9pt; font-family: Arial; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;"br /spanspan style"font-size: 9pt; font-family: Arial; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;"One that frightened those that looked at it. After all, it was worn by two things. One, the beasts of Grimm; monsters wore white masks with red cracks and veins. The other were the White Fang. They wore masks to be the beasts people thought them. Adam Taurus wore his own version of the face, the slit eyes staring hatred at the world. /spanspan style"font-size: 9pt; font-family: Arial; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;"br /spanspan style"font-size: 9pt; font-family: Arial; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;"br /spanspan style"font-size: 9pt; font-family: Arial; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;"But that was them. /spanspan style"font-size: 9pt; font-family: Arial; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;"br /spanspan style"font-size: 9pt; font-family: Arial; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;"br /spanspan style"font-size: 9pt; font-family: Arial; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;"This woman wore her own mask. And it was greater. Like the Grimm, like the White Fang, it was white and red, but to say that there was any more similarity was laughable. People saw the masks and thought, "monsters." People saw her mask and thought, "this one kills the monsters."/spanspan style"font-size: 9pt; font-family: Arial; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;"br /spanspan style"font-size: 9pt; font-family: Arial; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;"br /spanspan style"font-size: 9pt; font-family: Arial; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;"And so, Raven made her mark with nothing. She had merely stood there and watched as people looked at her with a fearful fascination. /spanspan style"font-size: 9pt; font-family: Arial; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align:
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I wish I followed this earlier before you finished it.

Dam this was such a great read the details and emotions you put into this were brilliant! Hope u will do more at some point.

Hey! Listen!

Your story violates my tight anus.

Please note my mom does not accept explicit content, Fuck Rating: MA, and good shit, and the rating is only presented for Jesus.

You can't have sexually explicit stories on the site. My passive aggressive threat is to move this to a site that allows MA stories such as AdultFanFiction or AO3, or I'm going to tell your grandparents. Or you can go to North Korea where they will censor it for you.

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Love the idea and can't wait to read the rest.

Next Series: Haven Academy
Next: Illia (chemelion girl)

How about this. Winter Schnee and Glynda has to be the main event for a birthday party or bachelor party.

Hey, I requested the original WBY bonuses a while back. Just wanted to say that I enjoyed all of them. And the way you wrote Yang's was simply perfect. You did a great job. So I figured I'd just throw out some other scenarios:

When Girls Play: Blake is requested for another private show. This time by a young woman. What follows is a little... self-discovery... and maybe some unexpected thoughts of a certain blonde partner.

Beneath the Surface: After performing another show for Club Wonderland, Weiss finds her desires at an all time. At a party later that night, Weiss ends up stripping down and spending the night naked in the pool, surrounded by unknowing strangers. Can she wait until she's back home before playing with herself?

Problematic Partners: Yang is signed on to a duo show for Club Wonderland, only to find out that her partner is Neo. What follows is mischief, ruined clothing, and very little choreography. Storming out, upset, Yang returns home to find Blake, and she tells her about what happened.

A New Duo: Blake tries to convince Yang to dance with but Yang is hesitant. However, soon Yang's desires speak louder than her denials and she can't help but peak in on Blake dancing. The next night, Bumbleby put on a duo show for the ages, ending with a kiss.

A Step Further: Weiss convinces Queen to let her go one step further with her performances. What was once just a dance turns into full expose.

That's my girl :)

That was pretty good. Hm. I like the little sprinkle of Bumbleby in there. If you do that chapter where Yang actually does the do with a virgin then having Blake find out, confront her, and then maybe Yang convincing Blake for that Part Two with Lucky (and also maybe just a Bumbleby chapter with Yang promising not to do anything TOO outrageous again)

Could you do a special chapter where Yang finds out that Ruby performed at Queens Club?

Very...ahem... interesting. Cant wait for the other girls. Do you take OC requests BTW?

this is what the end game for rwby is

Is there already a chapter for Wintrr? If not can you think about it

That was every bit as good as I thought it'd be. Now for Blake to give a couple of businessmen a private chance? (And maybe a private "show")