Good story with the perversion. It's anime so I'm never bothered by child pregnancy in it. unless it's rape

story is original and unique, I like everything but the total submissiveness of naruto towards his sister spoil this story 4 me. hope to see a version of this story without over the top femdom.

Genin at 16 the norm with roughly the same low standards and 18 in their case with the others. Wow.

Cant help but wonder if anko will end up in the harem.

I'd be rather amused if kurenai and tsume did. Be more amused if hana did along with her mom. Those would be some interesting chapters.

So are they actually 16 then?

Also did naruto impregnate ayame and despite liking and caring for both decided to raise the child and be separate from them both just because?

So naruto is his sisters sub?

Scorch is a wind and fire mix, enton is an advanced higher level fire technique without a mix except maybe something like yin.

So pakura goes from being betrayed by her village to a criminal in this story.

Um.. so what happened to kushina? That's really not okay and I see no mention of her in later chapters aside from mikoto bringing her name up twice.

I seriously hope it's just death and not breeding. Especially if the kyuubi did nothing about it.

Hmm, nice story hopefully more coming soon anyways keep up the great work!

I like the plot to all of the 'naruto neglect' fic. Can you continue this

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Great job please continue

This is amusing and you must update it soon

I started reading your story off of . With that said, this is a very good story and I can not wait to read more. It gives me great new ideas and I hope that you will not mind if I take and use some of the things you have, will send a PM with more info. Thank you for the great read and ideas, hope to have something of my own up soon. I hope you still keep working on this and we see more in the near future. However, I know life happens and hope to read more from you as soon as posable.