you've probably heard this numerous times but I really do hope you would someday do a sequel for this wonderful story.

very good

Kaito is hungry, wants to eat

I really enjoyed this :)

Well..this was interesting. Much better written than many fanfictions and had a clear plot and interesting character development. I enjoyed and it wasnt super long or focusing on any romance or anything. It wasnt overly detailed or under detailed. To be honest its one of the best short fanfictions ive read. It was ling enough to be a satisfying read (2hours for me) and even though it left a lot to the imagination in the ending, i somehow didnt feel like i missed out on anything or feel the want to know more. Although Adrian's reaction to Gabriel would be funny...or at least entertaining.
Anyway, amazing fanfiction and i highly reccomend!

I would enjoy a sequel, but understand why you’re not doing one.

I know I'm not alone in wishing that you would eventually write a sequel to this story. I enjoyed this story a lot, and reread it regularly, as you did a good job with it. While I know that you have a few different stories already in the process of being written, it would be nice if you would plan on continuing this one. Whether or not you do is up to you, of course, but it would still be nice to see in the future at some point.

May your muse cooperate with you on whatever you choose to write and share with your readers, for we look forward to new stories and chapters from you.

I liked the story. It is strange, however, for an epilogue to create more threads than it ties up loose ends when there is no intended sequel. Overall an enjoyable read.

I enjoyed the opening chapter and am interested in seeing how the issue with scar plays out and why AB decided that HP was barely a squib when this chapter shows that he is obviously a powerful young wizard.

Excellent story! Thanks..

This is an excellent story. I'm a fan of cold, dark Harry. Thanks :-).

Thank you for this wonderful story!

Great Story

Very interesting story, well thought out. I like the combination of a few of the standard fan fiction tropes — Tom’s end also handled well.

Since you are still writing, one hopefully constructive bit of feedback — every once in a while you include a couple of long detailed paragraphs on a subject somewhat tangential to the scene or the story. I think tightening or eliminating those would improve the flow a bit.

Thanks!

I like to imagine that, after his recovery/vacation and 'in the middle of his studies' about his role in life, Gabriel slowly starts to wonder who "Harry" is, and as part of getting to know who he's becoming, he contacts Sirius and Remus, and as time slowly passes (but within a year or so) he begins wondering whatever became of Hermione, if she healed, what she's up to...and feels a pull to a certain part of the world. Finally, after discussing the situation with his lightly amused Headmaster, he eventually gives into the drawing sensation, follows it, and finds Hermione, his mate.

AWESOME!