I'm team Zelda. People did die as a result of Link's actions. Zelda tried to be reasonable. When creating the new law, she made sure Link would not be punished for his actions. she merely wanted Link to be less destructive, and not to be so headstrong. Link was the stubborn one.

Based off Captain America: Civil War right?

Is Ledo the male version of Luda (Renado's daughter), or is he her brother that you made up?

Wow... That was insane! A lot of unexpected things happend in this chapter and you ended it with an amazing cliffhanger. In my opinion, the ending couldn't have been better, a new danger takes the stage? Who are they? What is their goal? Darth, once again you did a great job.

As said by someone else, it's short but sweet. I'm already looking foreward to the sequel so once again you made me craving for more. (Now that you mentioned it... Where is Din?)

Short but interesting,i exprcted someone to die but to my relief no one zelda with magic Against link idk howbthats gonna go it might go bloddy and fast or just a stale mate all going its a good story. ;)

The twist is exciting, but im concerned about why zelda went to a risk of her killing somebone and try to justify it or take llia hostage to lure him out the possibilities and numerous good job.

Even though you may have borrowed some ideas from the new Captain America movie, I really like how you are developing this story as it fits quite nicely into the Zelda universe. Just so you know, it appears something strange happened when you uploaded this chapter, as the entire chapter seems to appear twice (although intermixed with the story at times).

I love it so far, great job!

I really like it so far, its original and i cant wait to know what will happen! Well written too )