Hi,
This continuing is really great and interesting. I think it is a great step to explain improvements in Alex's chapter but I don't know if I guessed right with that.
Anyway, well done

i like it

wow ok good I like it but riderkitty your interrogareing skills suck

wow ok um ... so ... I have no real words other than omg its amazing ..!

Hi,
it is a really interesting continuing. Well done. I wonder who the man is who Alex shall capture.

epic epic epic epic!
loved the fight scene!
Mentor yassen is soo awesome
it kinda unrealistic tho that Alex would be sent on an assignment so early in his training.
It would be better if he goes with Yassen. Still i dont mind this.
Again epic chapter. Keep it up and update soon!
take care
bye

wowowowowowow ok the whole fight and the whole Yassen-being-fussy about Alex's fight was awesome. Keep up the good work!

Hi,
Please continue it. I think it is really interesting and will work out to a great story.
It is an amazing and new idea. Well done

i think it was really good. can't wait for the next chapter

Ooh, I really enjoyed this! Alex's emotional turmoil kind of builds throughout before softly erupting in that final little snarl. Can't wait for more!

I like it. I love "Alex turns dark" stories. :D

Though the last bit seems a bit... well, unrealistic. Some kid realizes his guardian died, runs away crying from the funeral, gets approached by a man in black who says, "Hey... wanna fake your death?"
My first reaction would be, "Who the heck are you?" and then it'd be, "Are you crazy? Why would I fake my own death?"
Remember, Alex was a normal kid (for the most part), and he had to be blackmailed into working for MI6 (And what kid wouldn't be all into the whole James Bond thing?). So if he said no to an awesome spy life, why would he say yes to an assassin life?

I'm sure you have a reasoning for that being why Alex goes along with it, but from this little snippet, it just seems odd. I'll still read this though, I absolutely love stories like these. So keep on writing! 'Cause I wanna know what happens!