Reviews for Holding you closer than most |
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SeiyaAria chapter 2 . 3/23/2018 Hahahhhahahahahaha :v :v :v :v I love it It's funny Please update soon Oh yeah, mitsu not tsundere |
SeiyaAria chapter 1 . 3/23/2018 It's funny and sad |
MienaiFille chapter 2 . 2/20/2017 Oh man, the image of Takano-san snatching that white teddy bear out of Mitsu's hands and booking it to the car is hilarious! |
yuriepe chapter 1 . 1/3/2017 I love how Ritsu order Takano. It's so funny. Please! please! please! update author-san. |
Apollomon x Stingmon chapter 2 . 7/23/2016 this was so funny i died laughing |
Sasuke-is-Badass chapter 2 . 6/8/2016 This seems pretty interesting and funny so far! I'm looking forward to what happens next! :) |
C'sMelody chapter 2 . 6/1/2016 God, I'm laughing so hard over here! Poor, poor Takano! Well, it's somewhat of a taste of his own poison, heh. Now he's the subordinate and Ritsu's the boss. Still. I think I would have told my boss to f*ck off if they told me to watch their children when I had been hired to work on something else entirely. Anyway. Let's see what you do with this. |
Haruka Hori chapter 2 . 5/23/2016 I'm loving it! |
Brandy rules chapter 2 . 5/21/2016 Hmm.. A sadistic Ritsu. I like that. Nice read. Please update! |
Guest chapter 2 . 5/19/2016 So for the story is very good I like what you did with Ritus . I am taking that the girl that after her mom. keep up the good writing enjoying it hope to read more. |
Shyfem chapter 2 . 5/19/2016 Yo, author san, first of all, you created a good story, let me congratulate you with that. This is your story, and you can do whatever the hell and create whatever scene you want, but I could never see Takano san, nor Onodera san, in this position. Takano's nature is more bossy, and Onodera has a capacity to be a leader, but he knows how to bow down, and he's not a sadist, he may be hot-headed and ready to argue, but he wasn't opportunistic. Ritsu and Takano might be on equal terms in the future, but sorry, I just can't continue to read this, it's too farfetched for me, given the character's attitudes. This might work more if this is Yokozawa/Kirishima fanfic, or Chiaki/Hatori fanfic. I do think that it will appeal more. Nyweiz, just my opinion, not to flame you or anythin, you're a good author and I read your stories, but this one isn't just my cup of tea. |
Kiolia chapter 2 . 5/18/2016 I'm laughing so hard over this chapter! Can't wait for the next one! |
effervescent bun chapter 1 . 5/18/2016 Yay! Excited for this one! Good job! |
TheBlueRoseQueen chapter 1 . 5/17/2016 This is really good. I look forward for the next chapter. XD I can't wait. |
deb chapter 1 . 5/12/2016 Nice story. Bit different from others. Ritsu will be the boss. Looking forward to the next chapters. |