Reviews for Power Within (Original)
Look what Jesus did chapter 15 . 8/1
Pretty sure if you were to put a level on Broly he might actually surpass Cell in raw energy and physical strength even durability to some extent however Broly is a typical idiot berserker in that his tactics are nonexistent, his techniques are unimaginative and he is very easily outsmarted. Compare that to Cell who has both Piccolo and Vegetas tactical mindset and Gokus adaptability as well as strength that’s within the same ballpark as Brolys there’s no question Cell would win that fight but not due to being stronger
Guest chapter 1 . 7/12
Ah yes, this makes perfect sense. Tai letting some random boy who his “girls” brought home without any form of resistance.
smurr79 chapter 5 . 4/30
This is a fun idea for a story and I'm really enjoying the character moments. The problem I've got, and it's a constant low buzz that keeps me from being invested in the story. Gohans abilities are so insanely out of proportion with the world of remnant that you need to make sure he doesn't just obliterate everything. But that just doesn't work with his personality att this point, sure he doesn't want to hurt living things, but Grimm aren't really living or sentient so him not turning all of them to dust the second he sees them just feels so out of place.
Son Joe chapter 15 . 9/22/2019
If you don't want to continue the story, I would like to take over it. But I will make some changes. 1. I will start the story all over. 2. Its gonna more than dbz crossover, its gonna be a lot of crossovers. 3. Its gonna be on Wattpad. And lastly, its gonna be called RWBY: Power within. If you would like to talk to me, you got my discord and my wattpad is called SonicJoe88.
sonic chapter 15 . 7/17/2019
I liked the chapter!
Son Joe chapter 15 . 6/8/2019
Please continue the story, Gohan x ruby are one of my favorite ships. I want to see this to the end. If you have a discord account, contact me if you want to tell me why you stop. My account is Son Joe #0531. I hope can get this.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/13/2019
Please come back
Jaypeg chapter 1 . 4/27/2019
I really enjoyed this fanfic, i feel sad it’s dead
GrimmjowTaichou chapter 15 . 2/5/2019
dead fanfic
stylo1 chapter 15 . 2/1/2019
honestly your plot is one of the better crossovers but i just dont care for the dbz story line running besides the rwby and the rwby plot isnt making any headway since you focus so much on emotional drama. so in short plot is good but way to short to be worth reading
stylo1 chapter 6 . 2/1/2019
i dont understand why you keep up with the dbz story its exacly like canon, wel apart from gohan not being there but its so close i might aswell be reading dbz.
gohans powers are simple to explain, very high aura with exeptional manipulation as semblance alowing him to fly form blasts or even swords, as such he has no need for weapons. but your explanation leaves him with only flying.
why is gohan so willing to let ozpin manpulate them for good or for bad is irrelevant you create either sheep following your every word or ppl who like to choose their own way making them your enemies
stylo1 chapter 3 . 2/1/2019
like a saiyan would fall for an illusion
innercityposse1 chapter 15 . 1/31/2019
next chapter please
Beowolfalien chapter 2 . 1/24/2019
I can’t really read this anymore, Gotham simply wouldn’t tell them his origins for a multitude of reasons. They also wouldn’t get on that easily so quickly.
Brixen Chright chapter 1 . 1/20/2019
apparently FanFic can't take star comments so the jist of it is I'm about to torture myself by reading a not recently updated fanfic... wish me luck
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