Reviews for The Sabbat
copet chapter 5 . 7/16
Haha, exactly who I thought would be next! I don't know what you will do with Kronos, but being such a great baddie (The devourer of all sons), I guess he would be last. Now I worry if there is Pitchinier or Seraphina in this story, since there is already a mother Nature in the books. But I'm really scared of what this ol' bad guardians might do with the story... we don't even know how they came to be, nor why they just sealed them. I bet there's a good stroy for that! Good day! :)
erica.phoenix16 chapter 5 . 6/5
Thanks for updating. :)
Guest chapter 5 . 5/10
Awesome chapter! The characters that you chose for the Sabbat Guardians are really interesting; you’ve really done your research, choosing concepts from Celtic and Germanic mythology. I never would have guessed that Mother Nature and Father Time would be considered part of the darker group of Guardians. It was especially a surprise for Mother Nature; most other depictions of her in other shows/movies see her as a very gentle and flowery figure. I’m looking forward to seeing how you’re going to be subverting this trope for her (if you do). As for Father Time, he seems like he’ll be a fearsome figure considering his other nickname is the “Wicker Man” D:

On the other side of things, it’s great that North and Jack seem to be on the mend after The Nightmare Before Christmas. It’s kind of adorable seeing Jack apologizing in his usual dapper and charismatic manner, haha. I am SUPER interested in seeing what you have in store for Jack’s backstory! It seems pretty ominous enough with the way that Jack woke up as the spirit of Halloween, I’m wondering if he was alive during the times of Sabbat? Either way, I can’t wait to see what you have in store for his backstory! Thank you for updating this great story!
Fan de Basil de Baker Street chapter 5 . 5/10
Ouh! good chapter!
I like that Jack feel regrets about Christmas and that he can be like Frost :) I can't wait for see the backstory you made for him
inFamousSlyMonkey chapter 5 . 5/9
Nice chapter. :)

I liked the little bonding moment between Jacks over their previous transgressions with Bunny and North.

Worried for Jack Skellington a bit since his first memories are of waking up tied up like a scarecrow. Like at least Jack Frost found out he died saving his little sister, can't imagine how there'd be a heartwarming story behind being (I'm guessing) strung up and starved to death.
gordhanx chapter 5 . 5/9
Looks like it's time for our big Jack/North reunion. This is going to be awkward. I did like hearing Jack recount his tale to Jack (man, this' blunt to get confusing XD ), in particular mentioning the doors. Given their ties to various holidays, perhaps this is where we'll find the rest of the Sabbat. We then get Jack & North meeting and it goes about as well, as you might expect. North is still understandably bitter, while poor naive Jack, is visibly shaken by how his actions effected North. And while it was good, for Jack to own up to his past mistakes, we do feel sorry for him.

This does lead to a nice little bonding moment, between the two Jacks, as they talk about their mistakes, Skelligton's experiences as the King of Halloween and Frost comforting his new friend, that things will get better eventually. Also, I'm loving the idea, that we might visit Jack's origins before Halloweentown. It's a really fascinating idea, that I look forward to seeing you expand on. And with North & Jack finally put the past behind them, a little quick, but still good to see, we learn about the other two Sabbat members. Eostre & Kronos. Ooooh, wonderful choices. Looking forward to seeing your interpretation of them :D . And speaking of which, the Sabbat prepare to free the two, starting with Eostre. This should be quite an introduction.
Mr. Spinner chapter 5 . 5/9
Ooh, I like the foreshadowing for the remaining dark guardians. Eager to see what they are capable of
Jokermask18 chapter 5 . 5/8
Love that this continues. Hope to see your take on Jack's origin soon.
Sean Malloy-1 chapter 5 . 5/8
Nice work on it
LivininCorsets chapter 5 . 5/8
Ooooh I feel the plot strings pulling!
Z-King chapter 5 . 5/8
Yikes! Also surprised that you didn't do a scene where the Yeti's wanted to beat up Jack Skellington for the whole Christmas thing.
Juxshoa chapter 5 . 5/8
Really good chapter! Keep going!
Carlom2408 chapter 4 . 5/5
1) as a weapon for Jack Skellington, you can give him that whip of slime that also appears in the video game Oogie's Revenge.
2) try adding songs like the ones in Oogie's Revenge especially when Jack fights against Sahmain, something amazing would come up to me.
CountOrlok777 chapter 2 . 5/5
interesting... Samhain being an old name for Halloween, krampus being the anti sandy claws.
Del21 chapter 4 . 3/7
Great chapter and fight!
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