Good chapter, even if Coil went down a little easy. I would have thought he would have kept the other reality going at least until the next morning to make doubly sure there was no PRT interference.

You should have called this [Worm: OVER 9000].
Because that's exactly the emotions I got from the few snippets of CANON there.
The shit, the shittier, and the shittiest.

Okay, I'd read the reviews and the .44 Caliber Hercules bug STILL caught me of guard! VERY WELL DONE!

That said, Taylor's role in that was an even better surprise! Though I'm a little surprised she didn't ask Amy if she could keep the chest. ;)

Please tell me that Taylor's going to direct one of the birds to land on Coil's new, freshly washed car?

Now I want a gun that shoots 44 caliber Hercules beetles.

Wow. You took *worm* and you made it *darker*. And between you and me, that is saying something. And then you made a believable, interesting story out of it. I'm loving this and looking forward to more. Thanks for sharing it with us.

Wish you could do a one bad day thing for Vista, would be an interesting horror of seeing her join the poor misfits when she can't go to the PRT, perhaps setup by Coil if she found out about his identity or rescue Dinah!?

Very nice work, keep it up.

.44 Caliber Hercules Beetle...
WOW!
This joke came from soo far left i was in absolutely no way prepared to laugh about it!
GREAT!
Thx for the chapter, it was a fine read, Lets see how many problems they'll have in rounding up all of the Dallons and Pelhams...

Awesome fic!

Very cool chapter. One of the better planned and most smoothly accomplished ways I have seen this done. You are doing an outstanding job combining their abilities to make them greater than the sum.

EXCELLENT
MERCI POUR LA LECTURE

This has been a great ride so far. I love how Aisha's coming across with big sister Lisa. Sophia getting her comeuppance relatively quickly for once and the real narrative effort being put into resolution is fantastic.

Also: it would be beyond hilarious of Simmie thought she was helping.

That was probably the smoothest takedown of Coil that I've read, but then you have done complicated takedowns of him before so this was refreshingly different. Kudos for that. I'm still hoping that everything works out in the end, except for Carol but she's a broken idiot.
I especially like the misperceptions on both sides of the main plotline. Though I do wonder why we haven't had any scenes with New Wave lately.

You are an incredible author.