thos was shitty chapter and mc feels like he just started the journey in dark souls. idiotic and waste of time if you dont change almost anything in the overall plot.

somehow i didint really like this chapter

i hope that pyrrha will survive

still i think its annoying that mc dosent speak

wasent the firekeeper suppoused to be blind

little bummed that mc dosent talk

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You sonovabitch, I was enjoying this fanfic

Don’t go

sigh i really need to check th elast chapter before i binge a story and get my hopes up

Well it's always sad to see an author stop, but honestly it's hardly surprising for any one who reads fanfiction. It's the sad reality that outside of a few popular series like Harry Potter, Buffy, Ranma 1/2 etc most fanfiction sections are very sparse with mostly incomplete fics.

I can't honestly think of many Dark Souls fics that went the distance, which is super odd given how popular of a game it is. But well I can totally understand your point. I basically did the same, I enjoy reading fanficiton far more than writing it. (I am far to critical, running each chapter through multiple drafts and edits) and as you say time is limited.

Too weak, i find anyone in the rwby world being able to threaten an end of game ashen one dumb as all hell especially since he's fucking immortal. Also the mana bar was a game mechanic magic in dark souls works of intelligence and mental fatigue and he was not tired enough not to use magic.

Don't worry bro, even if I may never be able to see the end of this fic it was nevertheless one hell of a ride, thanks for everything.

Your story quality has been consistently great throughout your story, I understand the need for taking a break for something though, however I do hope you come back to this, as it was truly something unique!

Oof sorry to hear this, hope you'll come back to it today, but that's solely up to you. Good luck with whatever you end up doing though!