Reviews for A Doctor, 2 TARDISes, and 2 Immortal Girls on Akhaten
Ally R. Swan chapter 21 . 8/28/2017
Oh yes that brilliant line and then the doctor remembered that she is his Clara. I loved this story! And now well...here's your 100th review :)
Ally R. Swan chapter 20 . 8/28/2017
Oh yes! The doctor! They found him or he found them. This is lovely
Ally R. Swan chapter 19 . 8/28/2017
Jack will die but he never stay dead. I love it. I hope Merry will be okay.
Ally R. Swan chapter 18 . 8/28/2017
An extra body to carry is better than Clara yapping lol I love Ashildr. And omg Jack. Ashildr jealous of Merry because of him. Oh I love how you write him so much in character its great.
Ally R. Swan chapter 17 . 8/28/2017
Yep she definitely has reasons for calling her Clara lol. Oh my I hope they can wake Merry up.
Ally R. Swan chapter 16 . 8/28/2017
Oh not this doesn't look good for Clara.
Ally R. Swan chapter 15 . 8/28/2017
Oh my what happened? Why was ashildr screaming at Clara?
Ally R. Swan chapter 14 . 8/28/2017
Haha not just a pretty face. I love Jack so much. And of course no one would listen to reason.
Ally R. Swan chapter 13 . 8/28/2017
Haha I dont think Jack needed the CPR but he might not have minded a girls lips on his.
Ally R. Swan chapter 12 . 8/28/2017
Haha I loved Jack's reaction to Ashildr's name ME. Haha and then of course he would flirt. Now here I am going to review the other chapters I didn't.
Ally R. Swan chapter 22 . 8/28/2017
So I finally got to reading this. I never got the notification though. Anyways I loved this story and I love how it ended with what Ashildr said about Clara. Loved the story.
Miss Stella Black chapter 22 . 8/24/2017
Awhhh I love this ending! The three immortals in one TARDIS, and Merry and the Doctor in the other TARDIS. Merry would make a fantastic companion, and Jack with the girls would be absolutely amazing. I would love either sequel, or a spinoff. Your writing is great.
This has been a really fun story, and I'm glad that I've been able to read it.
Radiant Arabian Nights chapter 22 . 8/24/2017
Sequel please
StoryGirlWrites chapter 22 . 8/24/2017
Oh, that was great! More please! Either group, or they could run in to each other here and there. How about Jack, Clara and Ashilder meeting Jenny?
Miss Stella Black chapter 21 . 8/23/2017
oh my goshhh the feels of Romana and Susan appearing! This story is lovely, I look forward to the next chapter. :)
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