Reviews for A Doctor, 2 TARDISes, and 2 Immortal Girls on Akhaten |
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Ally R. Swan chapter 21 . 8/28/2017 Oh yes that brilliant line and then the doctor remembered that she is his Clara. I loved this story! And now well...here's your 100th review :) |
Ally R. Swan chapter 20 . 8/28/2017 Oh yes! The doctor! They found him or he found them. This is lovely |
Ally R. Swan chapter 19 . 8/28/2017 Jack will die but he never stay dead. I love it. I hope Merry will be okay. |
Ally R. Swan chapter 18 . 8/28/2017 An extra body to carry is better than Clara yapping lol I love Ashildr. And omg Jack. Ashildr jealous of Merry because of him. Oh I love how you write him so much in character its great. |
Ally R. Swan chapter 17 . 8/28/2017 Yep she definitely has reasons for calling her Clara lol. Oh my I hope they can wake Merry up. |
Ally R. Swan chapter 16 . 8/28/2017 Oh not this doesn't look good for Clara. |
Ally R. Swan chapter 15 . 8/28/2017 Oh my what happened? Why was ashildr screaming at Clara? |
Ally R. Swan chapter 14 . 8/28/2017 Haha not just a pretty face. I love Jack so much. And of course no one would listen to reason. |
Ally R. Swan chapter 13 . 8/28/2017 Haha I dont think Jack needed the CPR but he might not have minded a girls lips on his. |
Ally R. Swan chapter 12 . 8/28/2017 Haha I loved Jack's reaction to Ashildr's name ME. Haha and then of course he would flirt. Now here I am going to review the other chapters I didn't. |
Ally R. Swan chapter 22 . 8/28/2017 So I finally got to reading this. I never got the notification though. Anyways I loved this story and I love how it ended with what Ashildr said about Clara. Loved the story. |
Miss Stella Black chapter 22 . 8/24/2017 Awhhh I love this ending! The three immortals in one TARDIS, and Merry and the Doctor in the other TARDIS. Merry would make a fantastic companion, and Jack with the girls would be absolutely amazing. I would love either sequel, or a spinoff. Your writing is great. This has been a really fun story, and I'm glad that I've been able to read it. |
Radiant Arabian Nights chapter 22 . 8/24/2017 Sequel please |
StoryGirlWrites chapter 22 . 8/24/2017 Oh, that was great! More please! Either group, or they could run in to each other here and there. How about Jack, Clara and Ashilder meeting Jenny? |
Miss Stella Black chapter 21 . 8/23/2017 oh my goshhh the feels of Romana and Susan appearing! This story is lovely, I look forward to the next chapter. :) |