Reviews for He's My Son: ON HIATUS
Lord Vaserious chapter 1 . 7/24
Intruguing stuff.
Kelvin Wong Jun Sheng chapter 27 . 7/19
Yup, konoha scums. Indeed. A fine description for them in this story.
Foxie3366 chapter 27 . 12/19/2019
I know it’s been a year but can you please update when you can
Reader21 chapter 1 . 5/29/2019
I'm on the first chapter and already put it on my favorites list. I'll review again later. I really appreciate that you posted on AO3 I can download it for later. Kudos to a good fanfic.
Guest chapter 22 . 4/4/2019
I literally cried when little Naru-chan's 'granny' was declared dead. why are you so mean author-san?
kuichigo chapter 24 . 8/22/2018
Love this story will you be updating soon if u not busy
nat chapter 8 . 7/29/2018
the ability of solid chakra. chains swords senbon shields barriers.
TheOddOneIsHere chapter 1 . 7/17/2018
wait wait wait... you're into YAOI?! that's just wrong... unless zabuza was female if kisame was married to zabuza... then at least it wouldnt be yaoi...
Kurama13 chapter 9 . 7/1/2018
I must be a damn hard ass I felt nothing when 'Granny' died
Chikeninacoop chapter 10 . 6/30/2018
pls put a yaoi warning next time in the description. pls.
Guest chapter 19 . 6/4/2018
A
Miss1Otaku chapter 1 . 5/1/2018
Gosh... I was reading this when it had just reached chapter ten... and part of the weird comment string. I'll have to read this again.
CW chapter 27 . 4/24/2018
It seems re-writes are all the rage. I've been reading here for years and have never seen a re-write get even 1/2 way back before the author quits. Too bad - I really liked this story.
PastelMuffins chapter 27 . 4/24/2018
Revisions huh? I can deal with that. Hopefully it doesn't take to long...
StrikerTheFallen chapter 27 . 4/23/2018
How far do you plan on going with this story? How much longer is Naruto going to be made to suffer before he's rescued and or released etc. If the story continues to the War Arc I think Jinpachi should be brought back as one of the impure resurrection bodies for Naruto to fight. Might sound a little harsh since Naruto never got to say good bye when he died but I think it'll be a good test of Narutos resolve and to serve as closure. Anyway keep up the good work. I'm a huge fan of fics like these where Naruto is raised significantly different to how it was in cannon. I've read some fics with him learning puppetry or being adopted into the Aburame clan etc but him being raised by the 7 Mist Swordsman is a first and really cool in my eyes. Again keep up the good work an hope this story is revised quickly!
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