Reviews for Return of the Dark Knight |
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vparadox12122000 chapter 5 . 7/8 ...lol danm... great chapter. |
SapphireAsashi chapter 6 . 6/23 Thank you for making him weak ass crybaby. |
FriggleBerry chapter 2 . 4/25 This story could use some punctuation and a good once over form a grammar nazi but it’s still really good |
Danirodriguez1995 chapter 11 . 4/15 The story continues, it's very good, don't give up |
QuestionableOne chapter 11 . 1/24 Intriguing story, would be better imo with a smaller Harem as you struggle to keep the members relevant. By chapter 11, half of them hasn't had a single line of dialogue in about 4-5 chapters while the story implies that a lot of time has passed. The girl from Baka no Test basically left as abruptly as she was introduced. Oh, and wasn't Gasper suppose to be introduced based on the summary? |
avjuan37 chapter 11 . 11/25/2019 please make more chapters |
avjuan37 chapter 11 . 11/24/2019 please make more chapters |
The Kyuubi chapter 1 . 10/8/2019 I'm really trying to read this story maybe but you really need to use more commas and work on the run on sentences. it idea is good but you also keep repeating the same things. you should show the people hating naruto, not telling us. Also the way you explained the perverted trio was strange because you just out their descriptions all in one sentence. you should give them a bit more of a intro then that. even if we all know who they are, a few sentences would help to refresh our memories. other then that, I like the story idea. unique take on the plot. |
aulshi chapter 11 . 6/14/2019 end then this is wow hihij |
Darktep chapter 11 . 5/15/2019 Is he going to explore the universe or will just stay around the Earth? |
Jessica9906 chapter 11 . 5/10/2019 Great I love it When will we continue? Will Akua, Erza be part of Naruto's Harem? When Naruto fuck with other women are Harem? When do Naruto Harem women get pregnant with him? |
TeraBaapBSDK chapter 2 . 4/5/2019 sorry, you destroyed the fun |
TeraBaapBSDK chapter 1 . 4/5/2019 most satisfying fanfic. please don't get fucked up later, because some stories just look good at the starting but later authors show their horny colors |
AcidESP chapter 11 . 3/29/2019 good story, I hope you continue, greetings, see you, bye! |
kyuubi ruler of all bijuu chapter 11 . 3/28/2019 Awesome |