I luv the story

YESSSS I'VE BEEN LOOKING FOR A MIRA X GRAY AND A ERZA X NATSU STORY

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This was a great story. I enjoyed it and wish I had read it sooner.

Tbh, when Lucy learned how to summon two spirits at once, I had no clue why she never summoned Capricorn and Loke at the same time. Easily her best close quarters combat spirits. In her Tartaros fight she should've summoned Capricorn instead of Virgo.

Lightning flame dragon only proved to be truly exhausting in Natsu's battle with Hades, when he expended all his magic power. Even then he had managed to start it up again, and used it briefly for a mere spar after the 7 years skip. Go further to the Tartaros arc and hes able to casually use the form with little issue, even going on to fight Mard Geer after that and then access dragon force, another power consuming form.

I do not agree with Jellals death, for a number of reasons. One was crime sorciere, his founding and leading of an independent guild that hunted down dark guilds. They wiped out several dark guilds and were an asset against the Alvarez empire. Jellal and Meredy were the only reason that oracion seis went with them for redemption. I know you said Meredy and Ultear would somehow join Natsu's team, despite being former members of a dark guild (which makes no sense) but Jellal could still play a role. Tossing away such a character is a waste. We also miss meaningful interactions we could've had with him. A clear-minded Jellal talking to Natsu, giving his blessing, apologizing, etc, talkin to Erza, his former friends, hell there is a lot that could've been done with him. But instead you just kill him off. Very poorly done.

I personally like Jellal as a character. Cool magic and hes a different type to most of the Fairy Tail characters. A good guy used as a pawn who simply wants to do what good he can while he can. No legal guilds, just him and his fellow former major criminals.

Will this story continue?

Ugh I’m getting tired of reading Natsu being an Idiot who’s stupid and annoying . When you read a lot of fairy tail fanfictions it tends to get REALLLYY annoying

Nice story g

Saw your story The Fervent Crimson Flame and I enjoyed ALL of your chapters from Chapters 1 to 37. Hope you might have to give Mermaid Heel an OC Guild Master because Mashima didn't even bother introducing her and left Kagura as an apparent de facto leader. Got some ideas for Jenny Realight and to develop her character to be a bada-ss in her own right.

Since Mashima didn't give us much reveal or expansion on her character other than she has Take Over Machina Soul by touching any pieces of machinery, the idea is to give her a role to be more than just pure fanservice (especially with the Mirajane vs Jenny episode) and is actually a powerful S-Class Mage in her own right. And that she has extensive knowledge on mechanics and engineers that Goku can relate with Bulma, and she may be behind the construction, maintenance and repairs of Blue Pegasus' Magic Bomber itself.

Jenny Realight is more Beauty and Brains and she did not win the Miss Fiore pageant just by being solely beautiful alone.

To make it funny, Jenny has a Berserk Button towards Christina getting damaged or destroyed and she will never live it down about the Magic Bomber being destroyed (when it was shot down) and crudely repaired (with Lyon providing the half side of the airship with ice wing constructs, and Ren and Sherry keeping it in flight) during the Allied Forces' battle with Oracion Seis.

As for Jenny and her Machina Soul, similarly like Mirajane and her inner demon as a side effect of Satan Soul, Jenny has her own inner machine as a side effect of Machina Soul too as well.

With a psuedo-Machias attitude that certainly make others wonder if she is really human since Machias have deceptively human looking appearance with personality settings, Jenny talks analytically like a robot after assessing her situation as Machina Soul allows her to scan whatever tech she touches and turns it into her new Machina Soul form out of it.

In base form, Jenny can Partially Take Over her arms and legs with powerful bionic metal ones similarly like Wahl Icht of the Spriggan 12, powerful enough to stand her ground against powerhouses.

Jenny's standard Machina Soul form functions and fights similarly like Wahl's Assault Mode in terms of speed, strength and powerful weaponry in her arsenal.

Jenny's Machina Soul forms:
1. Standard Machina Soul dubbed as "Battle Suit" or "Assault Jenny" - This is Jenny's base Machina Soul if you remember it from Mirajane vs Jenny episode, the one where Mirajane in Satan Soul Sitri defeated Jenny in one strike. And I was disappointed a lot when Mashima revealing her Guild Card about Machina Soul.

To compensate Mashima ruining Jenny's potential, this Machina Soul's capabilities works like Wahl Icht's Assault Mode and/or Genos the Cyborg from One Punch Man.

2. Iron Forge - This Machina Soul is a red armored suit with a welder's mask that reveals a bionic eye on her right side of the face, her hair in a bun hairstyle, a forging hammer, a left arm claw, four bionic arm attachments with solder burners, plasma cutters and flamers on her back and two stacks to release steam mounted on the backpack. It is capable of repairing and building almost anything that Jenny uses to repair the Christina.

In short, it is an expy of Torbjorn from Overwatch and the Techmarine from Warhammer 40k.

3. Optimizer Pax - This Machina Soul has the soul of ancient noble Machias leader of the same name who met her, appreciated her company and gave it to her in his last moment of life before deactivating permanently 7 years ago and tells her to never use it as a tool for evil or senseless destruction.

On her chest and arms, Jenny gained red armor; on her legs, she gained blue armor; and around her pelvis and around her stomach, she obtained white armor. Despite the bump on her chest for b***, she is fully armored. Additionally, two cylindrical engines attached themselves on Jenny's arms, perpetually contained lacrima flowing through them. Four turbine engines did the same along the side of her legs, two on each outer leg. Completing the transformation by adding two blue gauntlets to her fists and equipping a one handed glowing energy axe, and then a blue helmet affixed itself around Jenny's head, covering it whole, letting her hair flow down behind her, and leaving her glowing blue eyes visible protected by a thick visor.

This is her most powerful Machina Soul form. In short, it is an expy of Optimus Prime from Transformers G1.

4. Viridian Kriegshammer - This Machina Soul has the soul of old Machias warrior of the same name who was Jenny's childhood friend when she met and reactivated him and brought him to Blue Pegasus to be a new member as a little girl. Unfortunately at some point after spending bonds as a girl and the machine, he fell in battle protecting Jenny and the fleeing townsfolk from a strong member of Tartaros from the Nine Demon Gates slaughtering a village during an S-Class job and he gave her his soul to finish the job and avenge him and his metal body was buried with honors in Blue Pegasus' Helicon Village their guildhall is based in. Jenny still mourns for Viridian and uses this form to defend and protect the innocent in memory of her deceased childhood friend.

Its form is that of a slender looking yet form fitting green armored knight equipped with two shoulder plates, and a protective helmet, complete with visible power core, bolts, screws and stacks and rocket engine behind her back. Jenny completes the set with a Magic Shield Generator that is shaped like a pegasus' head on her right hand and a Magic Power Maul on her left hand.

In short, it is an expy of a mix of Balderich von Alder and Brigitte from Overwatch.

5. Little Christina - This Machina Soul is based on the Magic Bomber Christina itself that Jenny took part in building the airship of Blue Pegasus and affectionately calls this form "Little Christina". Its form is a slender sleek blue and white armor with wing-like jet packs, helmet that has HUD and track-and-targeting system, and is armed with Magic cannons, bombs and missiles, and can even wield a autocannon-shaped Jupiter Cannon that the Magic Bomber had.

6. Tesla - This Machina Soul is based on the electric lacrima generator Jenny made to power the Helicon Town and Blue Pegasus' electricity supply. Its form is a medium sized silver armor with a winged helmet equipped with a rail gun, thunder hammer to throw and return back to her, lightning halberd and a Tesla coil generator at the back.

7. Cataprachtii - This Machina Soul is based on the Great Crusade-era Terminator Space Marine from Warhammer 40k and her top heavy duty form.

Its form is a 9 foot tall heavily armored suit covered in head to toe with large layered pauldrons, and the pteruges protecting the elbow and thigh joints as it was functionally distinct from the other patterns, bearing additional plating and shield generators.
It is in blue color with the symbol of Blue Pegasus and a face-concealing Crusades-era knight's helmet with red glowing eye visors and her long hair as a ponytail flowing at the back that has red glowing eye and mouth modulator on the visor and that it has a Power Fist attached with a small but devastating Bolter Cannon underneath on the left hand, a Longsword Blade wielded on the right hand and a Magic Shield Generator n the back.

8. Gearbuster - This Machina Soul is based from the clockwork item claimed to be from the lost city of Mildia when Jenny touched it on the middle of the job for the Archaeological Society. Its form is a black clockwork armor with a mechanical plate over her right eye, bun-style hair, claw-like hands, and has a long blood-red katana, and possess the ability to read moves of her opponent as if they went slow motion before countering them.

9. Caedus - This Machina Soul is based from the advanced albeit mildly damaged looking healing staff found at the ruins of the destroyed Bureau of Magical Development that Jenny found looking for anything useful there. Its form is a white power armor that has a red cross on the chestplate and shield with a healing staff that has another weapon features of a halberd and a gun attached to it, and has a shield to protect the patients from further harm in the warzone.

10. Blaze Aggressor - This Machina Soul is based on the powerful flamethrower gun made by Professor Weisz Steiner, a brilliant tech professor and client of Jenny when it involved inventions and protecting them from unsavory characters trying to steal or destroy his groundbreaking inventions that would benefit society for Fiore as a whole. Its form is that of an orange heavy bulky looking armor with two fuel container tanks at the back, and twin Flame Gauntlets, that billow forth burning promethium.

What do you think?

Please make the Rune Knights as strong as they're supposed to be and give them justice for the huge disservice that Hiro Mashima had portrayed them as weak, incompetent, and virtually useless as cannon fodder and cartoony guards.

I have this idea of mine for the ranking system of the Rune Knights for the Adaptational Badass dose big time on them from the bottom to the top of the chain of command if you're interested of course for this story:
1. Cadet
2. Regular
3. Lieutenant
4. Captain
5. Major
6. Field Commander
7. Colonel
8. Division Commander
9. Major General
10. Lieutenant General
11. General
12. Minister General
13. Grand General
14. Supreme Commander

What do you think in your thoughts and opinions about the Rune Knight ranking than just being Captain like Lahar being Captain of the 4th Custody Enforcement Unit for example?

To describe about these Rune Knight rankings:
1. The Supreme Commander is the highest rank within the entirety of Ishgar's Rune Knights, who commands all the Rune Knights in the continent and possesses the strength on par with that of Fiore's highest ranked Wizard Saint and Ishgar's strongest Mage but is subservient to the Chairman of the Magic Council.

2. The Grand General is the leader of a country's Rune Knights and is on a level of a 5th Wizard Saint. Supported by four Generals who are direct subordinates to him/her when it comes to leading their forces in battle. Is also considered to be second-in-command of the Supreme Commander who takes charge by himself/herself after arriving from Pergrande Kingdom, the largest and most powerful country of Ishgar.

3. The Generals are the top ranking officers of the Rune Knights and the chosen 4 who answer to the Grand General and the Supreme Commander too as well and are as strong as a Wizard Saint. Sometimes they take in apprentices who are Lieutenant Generals whose respective level of power are that of Guild Aces in grooming and training them as their potential successors in the future.

4. The Major Generals are the direct subordinates of the Lieutenant Generals and are somewhat considered the middle-men of the Rune Knight chain of command and they are considered to be on an S-Class level.

5. The Minister General is the one who usually takes care of the internal and external affairs of the Rune Knights, usually involves politics and public relations that does not require a lot of power in such rank while the Generals lead the fighting, yet is stronger than the current four Generals. Usually reserved for veteran Rune Knights or former Councilors with military background.

6. As for the rest of the other ranks: Division Commander, Colonel and Field Commander, they control the divisions and battalions as they personally lead them in the front lines and are on the mid-tier class of power compared with seasoned Guild Mages.

7. And the Major, Captain, and Lieutenant, they command the squadrons and teams of Regulars and Cadets who are the weakest of the Rune Knights all like scrubs they are and needed more training, and three high ranks in the lower chain of command of them have a moderately strong level in their own right compared to experienced Guild Mages.

On the bright side, some of the high-ranking Rune Knights can be allowed to customize their officer's uniforms with their own fashion preferences along with their own custom weaponry and equipment that stands them out from the lower ranks in the chain of command (whose canon Rune Knight rank and file uniform with staves looks so boring and uninspiring, and needs to be replaced with replacement of something more practical yet formal and militaristic uniform and equipped with actual standard weaponry but the staves can stay though) and be recognized and distinguished so long they follow strict uniform code and protocol including the addition of the Council colors and ankh emblem in their uniform; be it blue and white; and black and white.

The canon Rune Knight officer's uniform worn by Lahar and Doranbolt, and the other Rune Knight officer's uniform worn by Gajeel, Levy, and Pantherlily during their time at the Wizard Saint-run Council for one year are still cool and can stay as standard uniforms for the Rune Knight officers in the Council military with some little modifications and additions into them if they wanted to.

Remember the MPF event of the Grand Magic Games arc and Lahar, who was a guest commentator, stated that Millianna's MPF level is high enough to get a position of Captain in the Rune Knights after she struck the Magic Power Finder device as first contender.

So I got this in accordance to their MPF rankings if these people were in the Rune Knights:
1. Millianna: 365 - Captain
2. Nobarly: 124 - Lieutenant
3. Hibiki: 95 - Regular
4. Obra: 4 - Barely even qualified as a Cadet
5. Orga: 3,825 - Field Commander
6. Jura: 8,544 - Lieutenant General
7. Cana: 9,999 - General (even though she did it through Mavis lending her Fairy Glitter just to get a cheap ass win the event)

In this chart, these are the MPF Levels for the Rune Knight rankings:
10 - 50: Cadet
51 - 100: Regular
101 - 350: Lieutenant
351 - 1,000: Captain
1,001 - 3,000: Major
3,001 - 4,000: Field Commander
4,001 - 5,000: Colonel
5,001 - 6,000: Division Commander
6,001 - 7,000: Major General
7,001 - 9,000: Lieutenant General
9,001 - 12,000: General
18,000: Minister General
24,000: Grand General
30,000: Supreme Commander

What do you think of the MPF levels in your thoughts and opinion?

I have a feeling Fairy Tail would not see that coming considering he doesn't really know much about the Fairy Tail world since he might have been busy studying the laws, the history and the ins-and-outs of the Council to further improve his lawyer skills and knowledge for the Guild and it is even way deeper than he thought but even he would be aware that the canon Rune Knights were so weak and useless to the point of just there to take away the apprehended Dark Mages and criminals into custody after Team Valiant defeated them.

Heck you could even give a expanded lore for the Rune Knights and their history and purpose as guardians of the World of Magic and military police organization of the Magic Council in their founding with their duties of patrolling and protecting the continent from threats, enforce the Council's laws and ideals, and dispense justice on criminals and lawbreakers they battled and apprehended. That'd be so awesome!

After all, I always wanted to see Lahar in real action with actual Magic and combat skills he displays instead of just standing there and commanding the troops in the canon. Heck, even Doranbolt can kick serious butt as a Rune Knight in canon.

Having Fiore have a country-wide military force of Rune Knights with enormous magical ability that can keep evildoers in check alongside the Magic Council's vast weaponry would certainly explain why they (Tartaros) hesitated from open conflict for so long (The seven year time-skip). To operate from the shadows and find the perfect opportunity in order to eliminate the Magic Council alongside the military Hierarchy, Fiore's military and magical forces would be paralyzed as their government has been effectively neutralized. The civilian government (the king and such) won't be able to do much at all in the chaos and confusion because of the lack of leadership for all the separate branches of government which is what Tartaros desired. A perfect opportunity in order to activate Face. Fairy Tail is just one of the many guilds in the country and thus not the main line of defense from country-wide threats such Tartaros. The magical bomb that Seilah had Elfman plant was just a bonus in the plan to eliminate Fiore's strongest guild in the aftermath of the Grand Magic Games.

To add onto that, it would also aid in the 'power of government' that one got a distinct feeling from the beginning of Mashima's story. They're not cannon fodder but an actual power to be feared. The Rune Knights: Fiore's civilian and magical military alongside the Magic Council. Light and Dark Guilds have a reason to be afraid of their attention and respect their authority because of the power they wield.

Anyways this is a really good story and I'm looking forward for the next chapter. Faved and Followed. :)

Great I love it
When will we continue?
Is Erza pregnant with Natsu? if not when she will be pregnant with Natsu?

On a reread I do think that the chapters where you do original stuff are really interesting, you have pretty good fight scenes too. I wish there were more chapters like this heh.
I like to think Zeref decided to tell Acnologia to fuck off for one simple reason: He's going to be an uncle! Etherius Natsu Dragneel has a FAMILY, a wife who would miss him. Zeref may wish to die but he clearly also cares for Nastu.

ew why mira and freed? He’s gay for Laxus, Mira is just the lovable demon who plays matchmaker.