Wow man, give me the shivers here. You are amazing in portraying emotions

Interesting. Laxus only took people who were worthy or needed a different life.

Why does Phudor need a Planetary Defense Team? I mean, Phudor is pretty peaceful and has a powerful shield around it? And, as this chapter demonstrates, the threat can be identified and then forced off the planet.
But, I have to admit, it was very cool to see that Phudor had a Defense Team.

Have read story all the way through twice! Really liked it!
Just didn't like the fact that Laxus kidnapped people from other planets and brainwashed them!
But very interesting style of world-building.

Reposted and merged two reviews. Changed a few things.

Again, for anyone who has forgotten, hasn't reached this chapter, or hasn't read this story yet, Jaakar was the one to trigger Shun's true self to convey a message.

Reposted and didn't change anything.

Interesting that Laxus Phudor has to recall what he needs to do when he travels to a Phudorian-city.
I mean, I understand.
I suspect a lot of time has passed.
At this point in the story, nearly two years have gone by, and more Phudorian-cities have popped up.
But still, you would think he would have memorized what he had to do, the night before.

How did you come up with how long a full day on Phudor was compared to Earth?

Seriously, I can't help rereading certain parts of the 'Ruler' story you have made!

I am really enjoying certain parts.

Also, in these three outcomes, their true selves break through the brainwashing and reprogramming, just in case you were curious as to how these outcomes were going to even work.

Maybe these outcomes could be different and alternate endings.

I don't know, just a thought.

Before the last chapter was out, I had three outcomes:
1: the Ruler finally explains what he did, but the people don't care and still worship him.
2: explanation, the people riot, then they kill Laxus, but have no idea how to reverse the process.
3: explanation, the people demand their lives back, but Laxus brainwashes them farther.

Reviewer: Emily P.
Sometimes I wish this technology existed.
With this technology, my sight disability could be fixed. Not completely, but, so that I could see out of my right eye.

Reviewer: Emily P.

Have made 6 reviews for this story.

In fact, I keep coming back to this story and reading certain parts of certain chapters.

I am using a few different ideas for my story.

Any details about what happened with Keith Clay and Gus? Guessing Keith went back to Phudor in 'Ruler'.

Meant to type Jaakor, not Jaakar. Very weird names for some Bakugan. The easy ones to spell are Drago, Vulcan, Wilda, and Helios.

Again, for anyone who has forgotten, hasn't reached this chapter, or hasn't read this story yet, Jaakar was the one to trigger Shun's true self to convey a message.