This story was riveting from beginning to the end. It cannot be easy to take a story that is canon and twist some of the details but still keep true to the characters and the known sequence of events. That has got to be harder than AUs like alternate first meetings which are totally different. Very nice.

Loved your story. Thanks for sharing

I hope that's not the end. I'd love to read more.

Aw, Poor John... But he's safe now (I hope...) I love this story so much. Keep writing. I'm looking forward to the updates.

Glad to see help is on the way. A rather heroic sacrifice on John's part but hopefully, one which will prove worthwhile in the long run. I liked your inclusion of the tiger-like quality to Mary Morstan.

I'm enjoying this so much and I don't want to stop reading but I need to sleep. I will finish it tomorrow and Review at the end. I can't wait.

That twist added to Mary... I love it, it left me speechless for a bit. Flat lined my brain for a couple of seconds before I was thinking, 'thank god Mycroft'. Im still at the edge of my seat. And thank you for telling me about winglock! That was god sent gift . I hope they are as good as yours

Some very good descriptions of John's conflicted feelings. I liked Mrs H and even mycroft's contributions. Perhaps it was a compliment that said werewolf can deduce Sherlock's plan.
Still... Difficult for a wolf to lose a member of his pack.

Go, John. Find Sherlock! (Thanks for the update) :)

A French language lesson and a nice continuation of story. Curious where you will take this next.

Excellent continuation of the story. The plot thickens as the characters begin to reveal themselves. I rather must agree that being a werewolf as John described didn't sound all that bad.

It's definitely still the 19th here in the States, good timing!

So... Much... Yes...

Ah, yes, your conclusion on this chapter was very much in-line with Sherlock's characteristics. Let him show off his natural talents in front of the person he cared most about impressing... indeed!

I particularly liked this scene:
"Make me," the detective challenged, finding his voice back...

Not John marching up to him and swatting his ass while grumbling, "Toddler, I swear," at any rate.

The vampire let out an undignified yelp and scrambled for the bathroom. He was blushing! He didn't even know he could blush without it being a purposeful act anymore. "

I love the fun you've had with this story. Your werewolf and vampire historical animosity is used to build the tension between John and Sherlock. Nicely done.