PLEASE UPDATE ASAP

Love that jAson a little friend in past that he's protective over that a new szide of him. Question is Mel an original character from the comic or something you made up, I honestly don't know i been so busy with my job I don't have any time for comic books i afraid.

I just found this and it's amazing! I can't wait till you continue your story!

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I really liked this. Where’s the rest though?!

OH SHIT SHE SHOT HIM. I was NOT expecting that.

...Then again, she's Jay's girl so I guess I should have, Actually. I hope this gets updated soon 'cause I really hope Bruce learns his lesson.

Dear Country Batgirl, I, Cherylblossomxo, is back! Did I ever thank you for shouting me out in your A/N in Chapter 5, I think? Well thanks tons! This chapter sure ended with a plot twist and I can't wait to see what happens next. Now for some completely kind and constructive criticism. I thought that I could see where this chapter was going; that she would be kidnapped and Jason would come rescue her. But, nice job in twisting this chapter's plot to becoming very not predictable. Having Dick and Bruce as her captors and leaving that major cliff hanger at the end; well done! Just remember, think outside of all corners of the box, and think, what do my readers expect? Then do the exact opposite of what they expect. Also, a fun little idea: add in another random guy as a love interest for Mel and have a jealous Jason? I don't know it sounded fun! Best writing!:)

This is very good for 3:30am lol. Keep writing thx.

If you find the time to update please do thank you, love the story.

Uuuuupdaaaaaaaate!

Dear Country Batgirl, I did in fact follow and favorite your story. I loved this chapter and can't wait for more! Also, don't worry about getting chapters up super soon! The story is almost better with a little suspense between the chapters! :) Sincerely, Cherylblossomxo

Thank you for updating! This is so cool! I bet the 'small, but strong arms' were Dami's. Love this!

Please, please, please release more chapters! You are such an awesome author!

I love this fanfic! Please write more chapters soon!

Pleas update soon!

That was great!I loved it!