You should make a smut fanfic on Grumpy x Happy. I would love that :) thx!

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Omg that was so beautiful! I especially love the character development in this story!

Those fourth wall breaks tho :D

Geez. Starchy's hella salty. Saltiness: over 9000. He's still my favourite character, though. Well done!

Oh shit I wanna know how it ends!
Sorry, I want to read on, so I can't write an elaborate review. Just know that I LOVE this story!

Wow. This chapter was just... Wow. I mean, when I saw that the name of the chapter was 'worthless', I knew I was in for a bumpy ride, but this? Phew. This chapter was... Emotionally exhausting. Wow. You really had me there. You, sir / madam, wrote a good example of why this kid's show could be greater than it is right now. The characters would do awesomely in an adult cartoon. Wow. Okay, I'm okay. I'm ready to read the next chapter.

Also Doc's burn at the end. Wow.

""Besides, that jolly fool is just a myth. A lot of jolly fools are just myths."

"Then why are you here?""

OH SHIT! Happy just got ROASTED!

I am already in love with this fanfic. I especially love the aspect of Happy not always being happy (if that makes sense.) I think it's really interesting!

"The sooner you teach him your awesome skills, the sooner he'll feel the liquid juices of Christmas flow through his body!"
Is that queen Delighful hinting at gay sex or is she just being strange? Either way, I'm still going to read on. First chapter, and I'm already hooked!

(Happy's fourth wall break, tho)

Awesome happ love you

Please do more parts

This is really good so far, oml! I really really really really want to see what happens next!
I ship Humpy a lot too, so I hope everything turns ok for them, AND Happy is my second fave character after Bashful, so I hope Happy is alright too!
Update whenever you can, (AKA- REAL SOON!)
Also, am I the only one who thinks this story is a little too underrated? Hopefully more people figure out about this.

Wow this chapter was so inspirational. You added plenty of detail to give us a feel of the setting and I love how you did Doc's character. He's not one to hide from reality even if it's bitter so his doubts in Grumpy were spot on and Happy having his doubts as well I really enjoyed instead of just making him obliviously determined. The wake up scene was hilarious and I can't wait to see what Happy does next. I'll be rootin for him! I bet that ol Grump just needs some time under the mistletoe. ;p

I love this story so much omg. It was very well written and lightly paced. The characters were well in CHARACTER and I really enjoyed their interactions. I give it a solid 4/5

GREAT CHAPTER! KEEP IT UP!