I smell JoJo

it's fine take your time.

Thx for the story, one of the best I've seen. I am little angry for not ending it but...not much. I really liked reading this piece of art that you created. Even if i can only think about things that could happen in the future in this story...I am very happy that you write it to this point. Story without end is not always a bad thing, we readers can now speculate what would you write at the end...and we can create our own ends...something like that.

Your story gave me some good time in life, for this I can only thank you.

Well this is all from me, sorry for bad Eng. not my main lang. you know.

Safe travels in life and wet dreams my friend ;)

So it's Albion but without the power limiter built in...

Trying too hard to make the MC edgy. It just ends up cringe worthy.

Ok... you seen to be having memory losses. I seem to remember Alex getting riser's powers. So should he have regeneration? Dude seriously keep track of your books would you? And this chapter was almost entirely pointless. Major OOC behavior overall. Fucked up shit man...

Plot holes abound! You seriously need to do a check up and rewrite some of this stuff. It's very clear that you didn't plan for some of this stuff ahead of time. Like in his first conversation with the sacred gear he was clueless about the supernatural world. And if he had spent time with azazel he would clearly have been trained to use his sacred gear. And his mother was a pure blooded devil so she could not have had a sacred gear to pass down onto Alex. How the hell were they able to put seals on him in the womb. If his mother was a war veteran she could have clearly killed riser when he attacked them. What happened to his sister at the attack and how was she the only one azazel found. Why was lucia not with azazel or did not have any guards? How did Alex not know about azazel until later on? There're hundreds of discrepancies in the entire story! You really need to work on this stuff. And could you please lay off the bashing for a bit. It's a bit too heavy. This is fanfiction. We can do whatever the fuck we want with the characters. Just because the creator fucked them for us doesn't mean we can't redeem them through fanfiction! Naruto is an idiot in canon. Don't see many people do that in fanfiction. That's what is all about. To take a character and build them in our image how we want them. The bashing is a bit too obscene and kinda ruins the story if its laid on too thick. You really need a beta for this stuff though. Do you have one? I could volunteer if you don't. I'm happy to help you out. Most of your stories are awesome! There are just some things that you need to work on.

Would have loved scathach to be in the harem and peerage rather than chulain. It would be awesome to have a girls only peerage! But I guess that's not happening... another good characters would be akasha bloodriver, tamamo no Mae, arcueid and altrouge. They are awesome!

Tf... seriously dude?!

Would have been better if issei had six pawns and Alex had two mutated pawns. Better numbers.

This and the other one need to stay dead.

I can't read any more, your story is horrible. It is so full of inconsistencies that it is impossible to follow it, plus it has nothing to do with development and things come out of nowhere.

Most people focus on her good side because she isn't manipulative that's only something you people that hate her say also it's quite stale to insert an edgy biased hating OC. I mean you can hate whoever you want but for an actual reason not because you assume shit. I dislike Rias because she's has bright ass red hair and is more like a thot.

Since I'm the protagonist monologing won't do harm since the enemy won't capitalise on it

I mean Russia is a nice country scenic wise yet not the government, but then again US and China's governments are just as bad