This was beyond insightful and very true to concept of the Loud sisters. Luan's words would be: HILARIOUS and ENDURING. ;)

Another relatable piece, and I love the use of the improv exercise

This is the most adorable thing I have read in quite some time. You are an amazing writer; keep it up!

Awww, so cute and heartwarming! ;u;

Gosh this was lovely.

It was so super heartwarming that I could honestly see this as part of the episode in question.

Kudos to you for a job wonderfully done.

It's nice to see Luan teach a life lesson that everyone can relate to. Good job.

A nice concept and a nice delivery. In my opinion, this is a perfect addition to an already good episode. I like the ending and Luan's idea to cheer up her brother. The interactions between the two felt in-character, while also adding more depths to them. Sometimes, we just want to read a story to make us feel good. And that's exactly what this one-shot does.

Not bad, not bad at all...

Other than the very few grammatical errors, I like this, it's a fun little feel-good story. I especially like how you didn't go the traditional route and added in the tickle torture to spice it up. It really fit her character well, even if Lincoln is a bit too old for that kind of thing, which by the way is my only other complaint.

9.5/10

Heh, I'll admit, that was cute. Though given the fact that I've seen a lot of this, well, there isn't much impact on me.

I'll admit though, it's nice. Cute and nice.

Though, I've seen a lot "Lincoln's unknown talent" stories around and a lot were cute. Really, I just say try for a bit more uniqueness is all.

Great job mate, I rate 9.5/10!

... why aren't you the one writing real loud house episodes for the show?
great job.

That story was great and touching. I've never heard the quote about our qualities being on our backs but it's genius and so true. I've often compared myself to others and saw little in myself as a result but all you need is an outside perspective from someone who cares to see what you're worth and where your best traits lie.

Ahhh, a little too cliche for me. The whole "wah, Lincoln isn't as one sided as his sisters, boo hoo" plot gets annoying after it's done seven trillion times.

awwwwwwwwww and the fact that this was luan :)

:')

Love it! Sweet and funny. Nice to read a Luan and Lincoln bonding story for once. Give me a Luna and Lincoln bonding story anytime, but this is just as sweet.