This is a great story and chapter do more Natsu x kinana and the other girls too these are to great

You had to bring fags into this for no reason? Loser

Good job with this story. I vote for Jenny next!

Mwahahaha, poor Wendy's world was just shattered into a million peices hearing that lewd confession from Kinana.

I would totally want to read stories with all those girls, and see what you do with them

Do Minerve next.

Oooohh this was such a good story do one about either Kagura, Meredy, Hisui, Minerva, and Jenny!

Great story update man!...good job!
..keep making what you do best!..thanks !

I'm not so much disappointed at the lack of a lemon, but that Kinana never told Natsu that Cana outed them in front of Mira which prompted an "EMERGENCY MEETING" of the Ladies of Fairy Tail, which included a recently returned Erza and young Wendy. The look of sheer horror that would be on Natsu's face at the mentioning of that would have been priceless. But the horrified look on Natsu's face when he realized that he had shouted out that he wanted to breed 16 babies out of Kinana in front of small children was just as priceless. And Kinana's apology to her neighbors, saying that Natsu was from a foreign nation called "Idiotstan" was almost as hilarious as her neighbors buying that obviously blatant lie. But in all honesty I'm disappointed that this story is now over. I feel that there is so much more to this that will go unsaid; like Natsu's eventual confrontation with the women of the guild- namely Erza and Mira.

Good fic. Let's see one with Minerva next.

That was nice ending to this story. It would have been better with a lemon, but that meeting was still pretty funny. I can't wait for whatever you have planned next.

Little army of children. Nice story. Lates

Nice. Keep it up!

Good chapter...

Pretty good.