Reviews for A Change To Change It All |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Loki is the younger brother. |
![]() ![]() ![]() please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome. your writing is amazing. Your doing great! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This seems like an interesting story so far. The only thing that really confused me was the fact you wrote Loki as the older brother when Loki was actually younger than Thor. |
![]() ![]() Great tale |
![]() ![]() I somehow managed to twice click on this story to read it, even though I normally avoid draco fics like the plague. I guess you have a good summary if it drew me in twice. In this entire chapter draco is very shocked. To be blunt, this got boring quickly from lack of change. He barely speaks yet Luna understands him perfectly. I know you did this for plot reasons but it reads like lazy writing. Please include more Loki! He's the reason i read this so far. Good work so far. Edit(?) Apparently I never posted this and instead fell alseep before pressing the button. Welp. Anyway, here it is. |
![]() ![]() I somehow managed to twice click on this story to read it, even though I normally avoid draco fics like the plague. I guess you have a good summary if it drew me in twice. In this entire chapter draco is very shocked. To be blunt, this got boring quickly from lack of change. He barely speaks yet Luna understands him perfectly. I know you did this for plot reasons but it reads like lazy writing. Please include more Loki! He's the reason i read this so far. Good work so far. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this! This is amazing, hope you update really soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow.. Are you really 12 years old ? Because your fanfiction is really good, I love the story. I would like write more but I'm french and I don't speak english very well (I don't like my english teacher ? Yeah, I know, I'm just a bad student) So I'm sorry if my review is really short and uninteresting, but it's just to say I really love this ! XXX Me. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg it's so cute. Love the story so far :3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this story. It's very unique. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A great start. I look forward to more. (Desperately wondering what Loki will do to Hogwarts) In the prolog, perhaps changing the title to under the disclaimer? |
![]() ![]() Interesting. |