Reviews for Transgression
Chris Emrys chapter 2 . 1/14/2018
I love how Wisely just sends his mom in panic, being all sarcastic x') It's such a teen things to do honestly, forget for a second sarcasm isnt quite the language to have at this precise moment XD
Also I'm eyeing all the ones that seem to know about this "bodyguard kind of" and I'm curious if Road going to America is just that or not (I see you, Allen reacting to Neah).
Also Allen and Wisely interactions are just, adorable. Wisely forgets how to act and Allen is totally aware, isn't he?
I kind of love that everyone so far is in good terms, I wonder if it'll change or not, but I love how its all set
Chris Emrys chapter 1 . 1/8/2018
I'm loving getting this from Wisely's POV, it makes us wonder what goes through Allen's mind, and Wisely is being so nervous its adorable, really~ And then there's whatever job Allen is doing, that "friend" I have to wonder if it might be Cross, and just what it might be ;) Which, reading it again, make me pause at Wisely first feelings seeing Allen, the "or something else" question he has. Its very easy to assume he's getting the dokis as we would say, and maybe he is, buuuut I wonder if that's just that owo
But also: i'm half convinced Allen totally noticed how Wisely acted XD
I really hope this turns in a multichap, its promising!
IfYouWish chapter 1 . 1/2/2018
It's nice , it could be a good story if you continue ! So please updates~~