I hope you comeback to continue this story

So yeah, Lapis, haven't heard from you in a while. Loved the second chapter, hope we get to see marco and kelly meet up in the next chapter! Looking forward to the next one!

I always have trouble hearing my ringtone in public places and it's too much trouble trying to find a new ringtone.

Not a bad start. Let's see where this goes.

This fanfic is a lot of fun. I love Kelly's backstory, she is such a badass.

The green ghost, what a perfect name. She seems much more adventurous than Marco or any other SVTFOE character.

Some authors have Kelly living on her own, glad to see she has a family in this fanfic.

The writing is perfect, easy to picture, great description, awesome characters and badass fighting.

Lets see where Marco takes Poppet to.

Love the song Kelly uses for Marco!

Wow this was great! Well, really good. Youre toeing the line on what feels like it could be from the show, obviously stepping away from the disney feel a bit, but still. It was a really fun read and I hope you can keep matching the tone. Love love love your version of kelly. Very similar to how I plan to write her.

so I'm a fan. Hoping for more!

It's good so far mate. Please continue!

Wow, you are a better writer than me, but i think it is because i have never written one before yesterday. I started making it yesterday morning and finished it today. I literally just submitted it.

Yes yes yes this is the SHIT!
I already love the setup and I'm hoping you'll make the kellyxmarco stuff as natural as possible. But for now, keep up the good work.
See ya in the next chapter!

Loved this :D You really managed to capture the visual humor of the show and the feel of the characters!

3 Rae

Markelly forever

Well that was a fun read. Pretty much incorporating most of the canon themes/plots and then moving on to something new with Kelly.

Always like seeing Sir Lavabo included in some manner or another, he always makes the story much more interesting.

The starfan13 is definitely unique, barely see her mentioned other than that fanfic where she is shipped with Star for some reason.

Great descriptions, characters are on point and I cannot wait to read more since you are correct when stating that there are not many kelly stories out there.

can't wait to see how this progress so keep it up.