Reviews for Will
Valerya Gonzlez chapter 6 . 7/28
Hi! I love your fic! It's interesting the concept you have, I would like very much to know how it will continue to develop, I definitely can't wait for the next chapter.
Greetings!
TitanGuest912 chapter 6 . 7/17
wow... I am just speechless. You have written something truly amazing! I would definitely love to see more.
I really enjoy the characters so far.
Good luck and I will be waiting patiently for more!
shinigami-seeker chapter 6 . 5/7
Omg amazing
Biancamanda16 chapter 6 . 4/12
Pobre Kakashi , pobre Naruto . Lo del transplante fue genial aunque aun creo que es posible que Kakashi reviva solo que se esta demorando un poco y luego Naruto le devuele su sharingan Que gran fic :)
iw chapter 6 . 4/11
your story hurtsss in such a good way...
You most certanily have a way with words! elaborate enough without being too much and such a good pace. Usually, in stories like this, authors drop waterfalls of text and don't really go anywhere plot-wise.
Also, Kakashi's dead...again...I get the feeling that somehow the fandom loves to see him suffer.
KitElizaKing chapter 6 . 4/11
And the plot gets way more complicated! Wow! This is going places I hadn't quite anticipated, but I sure am curious to go along with it. I can't wait to see where you're going with this. Thanks so much!
KitElizaKing chapter 5 . 4/10
Wow! What a revelation! And a great excuse for why Kakashi could not bear to be near Naruto while he was growing up, in case he had emotions for him and had to kill him anyways. Nice plot twist! No doubt he was glad that Naruto grew to be a great kid despite that, and that by the time Naruto was old enough to be in a place where he might lose control of the demon, Kakashi wasn't powerful enough by that point to kill him.
This was a sad read, and painful for Naruto. You must have had a tear or two while you were writing it.
KitElizaKing chapter 4 . 4/5
Mr. Ukki! So glad he was saved! This is intriguing. I love this little haunted house you've thrown us into. We're all walking its hallways with Naruto an that is cool.
Guest chapter 4 . 4/2
Hi! Just wanted to say, I'm new here, and I was looking through your stories (I came here 4 the KakaNaru and I'll stay 4 the KakaNaru) but I was sad that you archived the stories. In my opinion, stories can NEVER get old, especially ones about my main ship! Anyway, I love your other stories and hope you keep writing!
~Kiki
KitElizaKing chapter 3 . 3/30
Oh, the tears, they just burn at my eyes!
KitElizaKing chapter 2 . 4/12/2018
Oh, oh...wow! Naruto is going to be super pissed that anyone desecrated Kakashi's body like that. So are the rest of the people who care about him. I can't wait to see what happens next.
NoLongerInUsed chapter 2 . 4/12/2018
Interesting look forward to reading more :D
Please update when you can
NoLongerInUsed chapter 1 . 4/12/2018
Poor Naruto first he loses Jiraiya and now he has to go through loseing Kakashi even though it doesn't actually happen but it's interesting to see what could of happened if Kakashi did die and wasn't brought back.
Great start now on to the next chapter :)
Prescripto13 chapter 2 . 4/11/2018
Quite the discovery at the end of this one!
KitElizaKing chapter 1 . 4/11/2018
You didn't make it any better! wah!
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