I just finished catching up and cant wait for your next chapter! I wanted to say how much I love how you write both Ester and Julie and definitely hope to see more of the former! Thank you for this great story!

Great Chapter! Cannot wait for more

I like all of your stories but please don't give up on this one

Please Update!

Hey there! I'm really enjoying this story, you've taken Omniverse, with all it's wasted potential, and made it into a charming, heartfelt and passionate story! My only flaws with it, are that the writing has the occasional errors and the dialogue can come off a little stilted and unnatural, not like how actual people talk, making the more serious or dramatic moments hard to take seriously at times, but barring that, keep up the hard work and passion!

On a side note, I find Rook's design in the show to be fairly bland, not in terms of animation or anything but a bit too humanoid for me, I prefer alien designs that are more unique and experimental, and I'm hoping to redesign him, any ideas, for example how would you?

Thank you so much for writing this series! I hate Omniverse with a fiery passion, not only because of the pointless retcons, stupid slapstick, constant character derailment, and annoying harem tropes, but also because it has a lot of genuinely good ideas. I can't just write off Omniverse as completely awful because it has a lot of potential, so I'm really glad you're doing something with it! I love all the old and new characters you have added, the new aliens and redesigns of the canon ones, both your take on canon episodes and the original events. Thank you for all the time and effort you took to scrub off the layer of stupidity and make this into a worthy installment of the franchise!

Clyde is basically Napoleon Dynamite.

So Eon's time powers don't work on Anur Aliens.

Rad is getting cooler with every chapter.

Getting paid to sass people is like Christmas and my birthday rolled up into one sweet day.

Glad your back!

PLEASE, tell me the next chapter won't take so long! I LOVE your stuff!

You also had good timing, it was my birthday week, so thank you for that too!

A little confusing, but than any story involving time travel can be.

Awesome job. I always enjoyed seeing Ben from past and present switch minds and their Gwens having to deal with the version they remember too well, or in young Gwen's case a mature Ben she didn't think would ever come to be.

hahahaha, this was awesome I always love these new involvements

YAY! An Update! :D :D :D :D :D

Good idea changing up how Ben hid the different parts... never did quite get how he got it to some of those locations without the aliens needed to get them back.

Don't worry, I can imagine this took a lot of time

Awesome chapter continue please.

Now that was awesome! Keep up the great story!

Fun chapter. For all the hate Omniverse gets, this was a personal favorite episode for me. Seeing it remade into a more refined form is enjoyable.

Wish to say, you're recreation of Omniverse is rather fun. Adding stuff without retconing important stuff.