Reviews for The Salamander of Alvarez |
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jackyfloresq2001 chapter 4 . 6/28/2019 Can't wait for the next chapter in this story |
got7hardcarry1999 chapter 4 . 3/15/2019 esperó que actualices pronto |
Angryhenry chapter 4 . 12/5/2018 A hmmmmm |
Meazm chapter 4 . 12/4/2018 Interesting. Can't wait for more! |
Sly chapter 4 . 11/29/2018 Good chapter and the reasoning of why Natsu was at the tower was rather sound, and he got to meet one of the other main characters(other than himself that is). Part of me would like to see if Erza will learn any of her mother's magic instead of just her (Erza's) Canon magic. I am not saying that she shouldn't learn Re-quip but I would like to see her use not just it. Almost every Fic. I read, she only other magic she ever seems to learn is how to use some form of Dragon Slayer magic from Natsu. I would not mind if she learned something other her mother's magic, it could be a slayer magic but please if you do teach her a Slayer magic, just not Dragon, It has been done to way too much, personally. Curious of how the Makarov and Mavis will react to how Natsu is Connected to Zeref and Alvarez(and possible knowledge of the Fairy Heart(Lumin Historia)). Also, How will Zeref and the Twelve react to Natsu being in Fairy Tail (and for Irene, with her daughter)? I understand that you have other things to than just this, but I am enjoying this story so far. So please, keep it up. I know this is a rather long review but I really like this Fic. and want to help with it and give ideas of what might be good to see in it or in others like it. Please update when you can. Good luck with school and wrestling. |
guest chapter 3 . 11/29/2018 Great story so far. It is refreshing to see someone put Natsu somewhere outside of Ishgar/Fiore. It will be nice to see how he will grow in power and how the others from Ishgar will react to him growing up in Alvarez and who is brother is. I hope to see how Erza reacts to finding who her mom is, maybe she will learn some of the basics of Irene's magic, have not seen that happen in any of the fan fictions, where they interact in some peaceful manner, instead of just fighting each other. Also Will Natsu learn/remember the Curses he made/has? It would make him powerful but if his personality doesn't change too much, he will be somewhat like he is in the later seasons/chapters(manga): OP yet single-minded enough to be enjoyable. Hope to see an update soon. |
rufus264 chapter 4 . 11/28/2018 Great chapter |
rufus264 chapter 3 . 11/3/2018 Great chapter |
darkxlunatiic chapter 2 . 9/22/2018 look I like that for once someone isn't going for the same old natsu at fairy tail re hashing of cannon with just the smallest changes |
rufus264 chapter 2 . 9/22/2018 Great chapter! |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/19/2018 Really fucking reatarted |
janembajuice chapter 1 . 6/19/2018 Shorter than a midgit's micropenis |
rufus264 chapter 1 . 6/18/2018 Nice chapter |