Reviews for SG-Harry |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is a nice little sidestory. I could easily see 1 or 2 more omakes to finish the story up before they return to Lantis. |
![]() ![]() Story sucks. You have no taste... I'm serious. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like it so far |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice chapter. Got any more? ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy crap that was an awesome omake |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a very interesting story |
![]() ![]() ![]() This attempt at an omake ruined the story. If you make an omake, but make it stand alone, it becomes a chapter. A chapter that has skipped too far too fast and involved more crossovers out of nowhere. You should have made a seperate story or left it as an add-on to a regular chapter. Also, if you are going to mix universes. Try and keep them similar. Live action with live action and anime/comic with anime/comic. Mixes types pulls readers out of the story and smacks their head into the fourth wall. It's like cooking with a bunch of ingredients you like and expecting the end result to be something you like every time without considering that not all ingredients go well together. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Worm? A surprise to be sure, but a welcome one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() YaY! Still enjoying this and looking forward to more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ... a helicopter was able to confuse and evade an alterren drone? That makes no sense at all... did that actually happen in the show? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice story. While I would have liked another chapter, I loved the sudden wormcross. Kinda interested to see how that ends. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay so beyond your omake, which was confusing as I am not familiar with. I like the story and hope for the continuation of your story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was a cool omake, I hope you do eventually write a Harry Potter/Worm crossover. I have enjoyed reading your story since I discovered it recently. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So so many grammatical mistakes, weird word ordering and what not... |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really good. Could we get a conclusion. I know you might not want to get to get sidetracked from the main story but maybe you could write it as they are leaving the Worm verse. Harry could flash back to show how they changed that world, just summarize events, or mix up both. It would allow you to write what you changes you imagined as much as you want without having to flesh out the entire time Harry is there. I could be a single chapter or even an Omake. I am personally am curious about how your Harry and Atlantis would fix the world of Worm. Which ever you decide, I look forward to reading your work in the future. Thank you. |