This is a beautifully written piece. It’s hard to explain, but you were able to flesh out emotions in such a heart wrenching way but yet I don’t feel sad. Your writing captures the very essence of what it is to love, grieve, feel joy, anxiety and everything in between. It feels real. I enjoyed reading your interpretation of Ino’s emotional journey and it was genius to have this told through Sai’s perspective.

What a wonderful story - thank you for the experience and I hope you continue to write.

Goddamn
Goddamn
This hit in all places.
Fak
This was
Beautiful
Your prose makes the story flow like a summer night, relaxing but with a slight underwhelming air. The guarded feelings make this so real and visceral, and damn, a bit like poetry too. Wonderful fic!

Goddamn
Goddamn
This hit in all places.
Fak
This was
Beautiful
Your prose makes the story flow like a summer night, relaxing but with a slight underwhelming air. The guarded feelings make this so real and visceral, and damn, a bit like poetry too. Wonderful fic!

Wow, I enjoy this so much... I hope you continue writing more.

I really liked your story! Your writing style is lyrical and your insights into Ino's character were spot-on. I especially liked how you addressed her grief and her relationships with her teammates. I hope we get to see more of Sai's character development in the next chapters. Please update soon! _

Is this finished? Cause of it isn't, I'm really looking forward to what happens next! If it is, this story is beautiful and tragic but I love it!

beautiful..

Ugh. I dunbo what to say... but all these mixed feels
i'm excited for the next chapter.

I finally read everything and I love it to bits. I love how you describe everything with a theme of sun and sky and ash. I love how you incorporated the war and the flowers and ino-shika-cho. I love Sai being patient and Ino being uncertain and Sakura being mentioned. thank you for writing this

I'm blown away with they way you write. The words and the plot flow beautifuly
I'll be looking forward for next part

I'm halfway through this fic but I just wanna say your writing is beautiful and I love the story so far. I know I'm going to enjoy it for sure! I'll write another full review after I read the whole thing but my battery is dying so I just wanted to voice my thoughts before my phone betrays me

I enjoy your writing so much and I love how you portrayed Ino and her interactions with people she love in different ways. Accurate and beautiful. I love your SaiIno and thank you for keeping writing amazing pieces. Have a nice day!

Oh, how I’ve missed your writing! This was beautifully written, and I love the way you imbedded the quotes without creating breaks! I can’t wait to read more of this!

Danggggg I'M EMOTIONAL.
I MISS UR SAI INO FIC ASDHSHSYYAJAKSJSH

thank you so much for writing this

I'm amazed. All these feels, sweet, fluffiness, angsty amd heart breaking.
I adore the way you write, it feels so deep and I'm immersed in the story.

I'm so
Looking forward for part 2. I hope they will get their happy ending they deserved