This is amazing

This is a beautifully written story; thanks for sharing it!

I adore this story. Thank you.

Now Harry can really tell Draco that he fucked his mom while being entirely serious. Jokes aside this was fantastic, this is what all smut should be: absolutely delicious, and purely sinful.

This is real erotica. One of the rare and beautiful ones. Great story. Thank you for making my day.

Well, there's a lot of porn -bad ones mostly- on this site, unimaginative, boring or/and repetitive, trash most of these, but this is more and rare.
Erotica, delightfully written. Kudos!

Yum.

I just read this again and couldn't believe it only had 6 reviews. That's a shame.

This is really well written, sexy and fun. Narcissa & Harry are both great. I'm interested to see what you write next. Keep up the good work.

I found that the most unexpected pairings are usually the more filthy and with this story you got my blood pumped up. It was a really sexy one-shot, well-written so thank you for taking a deep dive into the unknown with these two god it was hot! I was pretty disappointed to see it was your only story here but also thankful you took the time to write this one and maybe you will continue to do so. Anyway I give you all my encouragement. :)

As erotica, it's excellent. You do a great job with the details without going overboard, and you can feel Harry's growing desperation rolling off the page. (Although the bit with the period sex seems unnecessarily squicky given the rest of the story).

As Harry Potter fanfiction, it's flawed only in that the characters are a bit OOC. This is after the war, but we don't know how long after. How did Harry get from awkward canon!Harry to this commanding stud? Why is Narcissa acting like this? The only thing that's lacking is a peek into their heads, so we better understand their motives and why they have the desires that they do. It works just fine as a piece of original fiction, which should show you that it only has a tenuous connection to the canon characters.

On the whole, though, good stuff.

Very nicly written.