Reviews for Ashes of the Phoenix: Year 1
noorootruter chapter 1 . 6/7
Please update you can do it!
bobacoco chapter 3 . 5/25
I hate her brother. Their grandmother is a Slytherin! He should know his family bloodline comes from not a spoiled brat! Make James tell Charles about the family and about Dorea too she is a Slytherin. Make Lily comfort her since she is a mommy's girl while Charles is a daddy's boy from my point of view of on one of the chapters. I don't care if he is bragging about him being the Boy Who Lived he sounded just like Dudley for no reason. Charles need to be discipline! But I have a feeling Ivy is the Real Girl Who Lived. Please update soon!
Guest chapter 2 . 5/10
Don’t use conservative, liberal or progressive when describing beliefs. I know you have been indoctrinated into believing liberals/progressive’s are good and conservatives are evil. I’m not going to get into how Adolf Hitler favored gun control, abortion and was a vegetarian. Or that Nazi is short for national socialist. I’m just going to say leave your politics out of your story. If you care about the quality of it then don’t bring real world divides into your fantasy. It just destroys the quality of your work.
SapphireAsashi chapter 2 . 4/20
And no.
ehanda chapter 3 . 4/17
Yayy an update. Man Charles is a dick.
PrincessMagic chapter 3 . 4/15
aww poor Ivy

great chapter x

hope you and your family are staying safe x
FlowerChild23 chapter 3 . 4/14
Snape is going to be shocked when he learns the truth about Ivy Potter. It would be perfect revenge against James Potter if he had that girl admiring him and wanting to be like him rather than her father.
GypsyWitchBaby chapter 3 . 4/14
Oh poor Ivy! Great writing, excited for the next update!
Kourtney Uzu Yato chapter 3 . 4/14
The only one who should be disappointed is you Charles when you need your sister to pull your ass out of the fire and she leaves you to burn.
Lovely chapter and take care!
Kenka chapter 3 . 4/14
PLEASE HAVE HER SMITE HIM WITH HER HISTORY BOOK AT SOME POINT!
Guest chapter 2 . 10/23/2019
Please update soon
FlowerChild23 chapter 2 . 7/21/2019
Wow please update soon. I like the whole Neville tracy thing.
kkamjongbelle chapter 2 . 7/7/2019
I like the idea ivy/theo ()
Immortal ninjaaa chapter 2 . 6/6/2019
You should pair her with theo. Draco is too common and fem harrys barely ever get paired with Nott
Hets chapter 2 . 3/30/2019
Why do the Potters think Sirius was the traitor. We're they enchanted
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