Reviews for The Familiar Who Didn't Belong
PatchworkChimera chapter 3 . 12/23/2019
I love this down to the romance and the differences between mages and witches/wizards, thanks for writing hope to see more
DschingisKhan chapter 3 . 11/6/2019
At least one wife? Surely no less than three.
GrumpyGrue chapter 3 . 10/26/2019
Zerbst wants the fireBALLS. Louise's fireBALLS. This chappy was a-OK, send more our way! Montmorency must be fuming, like the potions she gets brewing. Probably so shocked, you could shove up into her a paddle for canoeing, she'd have a delayed reaction to the traction.

There's a movie "Balls of Fury". One scene they talk about a ping pong ball paddle being shoved up an ass? Victim was shitting pancakes for a week. Sounds up Kirche's alley. Hers might be less of an alley, and more of a throughway.

I'm an irredeemable pervert.
Loke13 chapter 3 . 10/26/2019
very good, loved.
Reptil chapter 3 . 10/26/2019
So does that mean all witch’s and wizards are void mages or is Louise both. Keep up the good work
Loke13 chapter 2 . 10/23/2019
very good, loved
Reptil chapter 2 . 10/23/2019
This is awesome keep up the good work
GrumpyGrue chapter 2 . 10/22/2019
Balisong. I'm going to gut you like a Cornish game hen.
Mickeal101 chapter 2 . 10/22/2019
Love it! Hope to see another chapter soon.
Boyzilla chapter 2 . 10/22/2019
I was laughing my ass off, Alex has a wonderful taste in ‘protecc from bullying’
GrumpyGrue chapter 1 . 5/23/2019
Is Kirche going to die of STDs? Or Alexandria? Stick a wand up there, and start scourgifying.
Reptil chapter 1 . 4/19/2019
This is going to be awesome
Chimera Spyke chapter 1 . 4/10/2019
An interesting start.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/28/2019
Quoting Kamina, not only does this make a good first chapter, this make the whole premise good.
lestibur chapter 1 . 2/27/2019
Hey this fic look so intresting from the beginning, I hope the next chapter soon