Love this story! Every one is in character! Keep up the good work!

I was so happy to see another chapter! I love where the story is going. Hope your job search is successful!

I’m so glad you updated. I love your writing

Hi! I just wanted to say I enjoyed this chapter and I can't wait for the next one! :)

Loved it!

So glad you are back, just went through and reread the whole story

This is such a heartbreaking but sweet story. I hope you finish it. I would love to see how it turns out for them.

I don't usually read WIPs but I was bored and decide to give it a chance. I really love it. Do you plan to update/finish it soon?

Ps: I'm totally in love with Ashley. It's a first for a OC.

hope you write another update soon! i’m so invested

Hi! I just wanted to say that I've enjoyed this story so far and I can't wait to see what happens next! :)

This story is great so far. I found it last year when you were up to chapter 5 or so. Just found it again recently bookmarked this time (i just kept it in an open tab and then phone broke). I love all the background story, details and depth you give many of the characters and the chemistry between characters. Also the details you put in are great and the little callbacks, sometimes subtle to past episodes. This is amazing so far and much better closure for the show.
1 question and 1 thought
Do you have a set number of chapters and\ending in your head?
1. Do you plan on having hyde and kelso have a heart to heart? hyde open up to kelso more and talk about when him and jackie first started dating beginning of season 5 his feelings etc. I know they resolved it in the show but it would be cool to add more depth and detail between them and talk about that stuff and know that kelso supports him and they are 100% cool and on same page.
2. I think you brushed on it in your story but did kelso and jackie do it at the hotel? I got the feeling of no but why was he in a towel? That should be cleared up and apologized for (either way) between kelso and hyde to. Similuar to the heart to heart and sharing feelings you gave hyde and jackie which was great; one between hyde and kelso would be great as well. Maybe another between hyde and eric to. Could even have one with red. Doesnt have to be super long (with eric, red etc) could even just be them talking about jackie just something to show their closeness and bond. Could just be little moments like he had with laurie at the beginning.
Lastly i like how you gave laurie more development and background how her and hyde are close and her abd jackie and eric. And eric and jackie. I know i already said i love the chemistry just wanted to point it out again lol. Also i like how you added ashley to the story and her and hydes friendship. Oh yeah do you plsn on touching on about any kelso\donna california hookups? I mean i kinda hope not i mean for kelsos sake. And donna coming onto hyde! I guess you dont ship donna\eric lol. I hope hyde snd kelso didnt hook up with donna i mean theyre erics best friends and know he loves her. But it would make donna a complete bitch. If you wrote it where she came onto them both but both denied her. That or just dont write (but thsts bc i like donna\eric lol). The way your taking donna is interesting to read, different but also realistic or at least not far fetched. I read her whole jackie speech in her voice angry and everything (i do with all the characters lol). Great story so far.

this is the sweetest story! looking forward to the next chapters!

Love this!

Trying not to cry at this story.

You're killing me! I hope you update before the end of the year!