Soooo Good. Please write another!

I like your writing so much and am glad I found you, can't wait to read more chapters.

You are a wonderful writer, thank you for writing this story for all of us little Star Trek nerds!

This is such a cute story very calming. Spock better be careful memories is what makes us what we are. Every memory has a message.

Great start. I love the idea of Michael’s brothers on an away mission together.
Spock (all Star Trek versions) and Saru are my favorite characters. I think you’d captured their voices quite well.
Looking forward to more.

Interesting, having Spock and Saru work together. I've often thought they'd make a good team. I liked Spock's memory of the blue flowers; it would be nice to see Spock and Saru exchange stories (and complaints) about their adopted sister, and come to understand her and each other better that way.
Also, a straightforward Star Trek-like scientific mission makes a nice change from all the angst in canon.