What I wanna know is... shouldn’t they still be in Hogwarts? Cuz they’d only be 17 here unless you made it so they were born earlier xD

This is a great story so far!

It's hard to get involved with this fic when it doesn't read like a completed fic. This moreso resembles a rough outline or draft where nothing has been edited or checked for inconstencies etc.

Harry has friends, but there's like four lines of dialogue in 30 bloody chapters?

Timeskip is overused and poorly done, where 10 years has passed in 30 chapters and nothing was really set up during that time.

How can British citizens run for the French Senate?

Basilisk gaze killed via the naked eye only when the image is a reflection or otherwise distorted does it petrify instead of kill.

says here 114 chapters on 190k words thats like 2k words per chapter wut

I know it's probably fixed in the later chapters but it's really annoying me so I gotta say that it's delacour and not delcour.

I'm more confused with what happened to the Germans, that wasn't addressed at all after they left their allies in the forest. Their retreat was pretty much why they lost that battle so I don't get why no one would talk about that

I have kinda tried to stick it with this story, but there are so many mistakes on small things, Delcour is actually spelt Delacour for starters, Lily was good at charms, James was the Transfiguration expert. You say Harry has friends, and then don't show any interaction with them.

So I'm out

So Harry's family is just not involved at all?

I can't decide whether 5 daughters are a bigger nightmare than 5 sons.

I am glad you still update this story, because its a good one.

Great Chapter can't wait till the next one!

I like Harry having a nice and big family, makes the story really sweet. But I have to agree with a previous reviewer that Harry can't have a 1 year old and a 5 month old. That would mean she was born premature so maybe change the last twos age or make them twins.

How can a person have 1 year old and 5 month old children ?