Interesting. Harry seems to go from old soul to young boy and back far too much. It's rather disjointed. However, the story is still enjoyable. Thanks for writing.

The characters are wonderful, can't wait for the action to pick up. Thanks!

Nice heartwarming story so far.

Another good chapter. Thanks for writing!

Great story, thanks for writing!

Oh thank the gods, the story is NOT dead. Can barely wait to see what comes next.

Gods, this is such a good story. The overall flow, the conversations and structure and all top notch. I wish I could give you constructive criticism but I'm afraid I'm not a literary critic so what little I could say to 'improve' it would be purely subjective. Here's hoping you continue this gem.

This is such a good story. The characters, the plot development, all of it. I can't wait to read more!

This is the most raw, intense, and realistic encounter with Truth I've read, more so because it was Harry. Very well written!

And that's the tea. Great chapter, the events occurring have got me real excited for what will happen next. I can see the plot blossoming before my eyes and it's a beautiful sight. Thanks for so much to read!

oh NO
U SAID KIMBLEE WOULD BE HERE AND NOW IM S A D

I'm cryING-
it's ok I didn't need that heart anyway

it's just how much I like this is -rips heart out because I, a fool, cannot express-

Thanks for the chapter.

I really love reading this story! The characters are so compelling and realistic and the writing is more complex and beautiful than I could ever manage to produce. I always get so excited every time a new chapter comes out! It's like Christmas come early so often.

You can't just twist the plot on us like that, you freaking amazing author!