I think she may have bit off more than she can chew once the genetic sample results come back and thy match Vader.

Jacksonion's Democracy's comment is right. Good job with the chapter, but it is OOC of Luke to let his guard down and just suddenly lay with, by the descriptions stated, one of the most recognizable figures in Star Wars EU, the Black Widow of Star Wars, Mara Jade. Shouldn't Luke also be aware of the "Will of the Force" so that he can be more careful with these encounters? That's my only gripe, but yea.

ahahah yeah, this is it, the plot thickens
͜ʖand I enjoy every second of it

Would really love too see more of Mara Jade in the future, I see Luke Skywalker identity coming out before he meets Vader for the next time.

That was. nice enough chapter, in my opinion not much happened other than Mara Jade's introduction. More of a filler chapter. But it was nice enough.
I do think it was a little stupid of Luke not to be suspicious of her identity. I understand he thought she wasn't exactly what she was portraying but come on, he is Luke Skywalker and a beautiful red headed girl with green eyes approach him and him not instantly suspecting her of being Mara Jade.
Anyway,
Hope for more soon.

Yeah, when you first described her I knew she was Mara. I do wonder if the emperor will tell Vader about Luke or wait until he finds out on his own. Or even try to get Luke as the replacement for Vader without ever telling Vader about him.

I SHIP IT I SHIP IT I SHIP IT

Do you have any idea just how funny this is going to be?

Instead of Darth Vader hunting the Rebellion to capture his son, Luke Skywalker, destroyer of the Death Star. Probably due to increased security so that Luke name is never known or credited.

Instead the drifter Clint Eastwood is instead going to be relentlessly hunted down by Vader, even funnier if Luke had the foresight to ask the Rebellion to create an actual false identify for Clint Eastwood in case he ever needed it.

Even funnier is if Vader learned of Luke Skywalker and thought that the Rebellion was using that name to associated it with the hero of the Clone Wars Anakin Skywalker, because he already knows his sons name is Clint Eastwood.

Okay, this chapter is pretty awesome, and the first name that popped to mind was the ever Star Wars legendary Mara Jade. But there is also another red head imperial agent that was also revealed to be an Emperors hand, and that was Shira Brie, who also later became Lumiya.

Or is this a third random red head Emperors hand?
Because I can imagine at some point all three come to gossip, all believing that the other is an Imperial Intelligence Agent and they alone are The Emperors Hand, and realising that the one they are talking about is the same man, and wondering how Clint Eastwood managed to end up intimate with 3 agents, and at the coincidence that all three are red heads, and wondering if someone high up in the Empire is interfering in Clints love life.

Even funnier if they overhear Vader stating "That's my boy," when hearing about Clints achievements.

Also is Luke going to use his metaknowledge? about the EU books and their story lines?
Eye of Palpatine from Children of the Jedi and Callista Ming, and other plotlines.

wait was that mara jade? as in luke's future wife?! because that would be so cool. if that is mara jade, i really want to see luke's reaction to finding out that he just met his "legend" counterpart's wife.

Ok, this is absolute bs to be honest. If you're reincarnated on Star Wars Mara Jade would pop up in your mind every time you see a redhead. Maybe you can get away with the excuse of him being distracted at the moment, but the thought MUST cross his mind later.

Looks like Vader and Palps will look down on how weak Luke is due to Mara's vast underestimation of Luke who's hiding his force presence and skill. Still though, shouldn't Luke be much stronger than his canon counterpart by virtue of an self-insert's perspective? Surely obi-wan would help Luke once he finds out the powers of various Old Republic-era Jedi and Sith, not to mention Revan. I'm sure Kenobi will have much more hope in redeeming Anakin once he found out from Luke that Revan was redeemed due to his relationship with Bastila. I think it's a good time to bring Yoda from Dagobah is as well, bring him out of his exile and into the Alliance. Yoda could also help Luke in training. Good job!

honestly I hope you break the mold with Luke, catch a couple blaster bolts mid air with the force and use a little lightning. I get everyone has their own take on the force, but force powers are that force powers. let's live it up a little.

Glad to see Mara! Looking forward to Luke's reaction to meeting her again in the future!

The very second Red Hair and Green Eyes came I was like 'dat bitch is Mara Jade'.