Reviews for Heir of the Dragon’s Flame
Atomsk the Pirate King chapter 12 . 6/11
Please continue!
UnsanMusho chapter 12 . 6/4
Didn't think Dumbledore would just give up like that, nor did I think that Richard would actually start of the road of bettering himself. I look forward to the next chapter
UnsanMusho chapter 4 . 6/4
I'm so happy in seeing Lily and James at least acknowledge their mistake and aren't trying to force their way into his life, though I question James when he went on his rant about not bringing shame to the family name. Honestly I'm so tired of this neglected or abandoning fic where the parents just become so unreasonable. Anyways I look forward to how Lily and James try to reconnect with their lost son.
zero fullbuster chapter 12 . 6/4
love it.
great update as always.
I can't wait what happens next.
Calmzone1 chapter 11 . 5/31
Quibbly Wibbly Greater Good...only at the behest of Albus...ahem..Dumbledore. :). Lol, time is coming to face the truth of what you have done and receive Justice.

Huh. I wonder if anyone has ever written where Dumbledore is arrested and demands Justice?
cornholio4 chapter 11 . 5/30
Hope this destroys Dumbledore’s case
Packer82 chapter 10 . 4/6
Love it! I hope you'll continue it. Thx for sharing your talent! Hope more comes soon!
SkylerHollow chapter 10 . 3/8
Thanks for the chapter. Nice use of small references from other sources.
zero fullbuster chapter 10 . 3/8
Love it.
Great update as always.
I can't wait what happens next.
nlou chapter 5 . 3/8
comedy gold that, nice an at the end lol
Guest chapter 3 . 3/2
A white guy being placed in charge of all magical Japan and a father okay with his daughter being a sex slave whore in a harem... Yep that makes since. But at least I know this is officially a self insert. A very pathetic one at that.
Guest chapter 3 . 3/2
Woman don’t think or plan to share a man. A man cannot love two woman equally. In fact only a vile narcissist would ever think like this and those people are legit garbage human beings.

If you are writing smut then it doesn’t matter. If you are trying to write a serious story you fail miserably. The fact you try to some how justified absolute bs just makes your story look more pathetic. Authors who put this ludicrously weird plot point in their stories are just broadcasting that they have little to know experience with actual real life woman.
Guest chapter 2 . 3/2
Why would the gods punish Lily and James? If their actions are punishable why aren’t Voldemort and his followers actions punishable? Why don’t the Gods punish all magic users who have done wrong? Do you see the plot holes? There’s to many to count for you not to see them. Suspension of disbelief can only go so far.
Guest chapter 2 . 3/2
The gods going to war and destroying the world for one person!? Dude, come on. That’s just ridiculous and not believable in any way.
Guest chapter 2 . 3/2
I really liked the story you were inspired by too. All except one thing. The Gods and Goddesses plot point. Having beings like that just destroys any believability of the story. Why would gods care about one boy? Why would they interfere when Voldemort was running amok. There are so many plot holes with having beings like gods in you story it just takes away from the immersion. You are a good writer and grammar and sentence structure is good. But adding the gods plot point, just like the story you were inspired by, really kneecaps your over all narrative.
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