Reviews for Earning Her Stripes |
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![]() ![]() I'm enjoying this story so far, and looking forward to more. Thanks for sharing it with us. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Been rereading this and I find it to be very interesting. Makes me wonder if their original plan will even happen the way they presented it. Honestly I can’t wait for this to be taken back up again. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Big fan of this. Either direction this goes. I could see the original plan going through, but I'm not feeling like this is the direction you're going. The power balance of the group pre-powers was firmly in the hands of Sophia, despite Emma being the nominal leader. With all three of them having powers now though, that's not the case, and Emma is taking actual leadership. Its really looking like Emma and Madison are down to be heroes, not vigilantes. They don't approve of Shadow Stalkers methods and willingness to kill and don't have the hesitation to shut her down when she's going to execute someone. Its only a matter of time before that disagreement with her methods shows as a disagreement with her mindset, the thing that's caused this whole bullying fiasco. Emma used to be best friends with Taylor, when she bought into Sophia's worldview she did it to make herself stronger and to "make Taylor stronger too," now though she has a vial that could make Taylor strong. I think it will be cool to see how this goes, but my moneys on Sophia going villain and Taylor joining Emma and Madison. The question is if they go through with the Locker plan first. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Liking your story. Can't wait to see where it goes. To be honest, I started reading it because I thought it was about Taylor becoming like the Siberian. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, one can see the signs that while Sophia was initially rather enamored with the plan, she's now dissatisfied with it because she's not the leader of the team. I await the inevitable self-destruction of the team when the new heroes finally admit to themselves that Sophia is a major liability to their team. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting, Emma is a Brute and Madison is a Tinker, I wonder what's in the third vial and if it will interact with Taylor's nascent connection to the QA shard. Trying to remember if it was canon or not; I think there was something in one of the interludes but it's been years since I last read Worm. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not sure how I missed this one for so long. Looks like it's off to an intriguing start, can't really say good since they are planning a major crime. |
![]() ![]() ![]() based on the title im guessing Siberian powers. but im just sitting here thinking of Siberian projection plus queen admin equals invincible projection army |
![]() ![]() ![]() dont know what power your going to give Taylor's but knowing you it could be anything from something dumb at the very least or potentially bull shit that nobody ever bothered to think about I can pretty much imagine you pulling out the "I'm a potential endbringer AMMA FIRE MA LASER, now bitch your move" kind of plot |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fascinating. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmmmmm... Sophia starting to be the voice of criticism for the group, and the cracks in the other two's lines of thought are starting to show for anyone with any context to see. Either their plan is going to backfire on them majorly, or they are going to be successful in turning Taylor into a villain. The irony of the situation would be that Taylor and Emma had apparently always played 'heroes' when they were children and pretending to be partners as well. Or... and this is something more radical... are they to either have a massive change of heart and not do it, or will they attempt to recruit Taylor and say claim that they were only trying to 'help' her? I would agree with others in stating that Emma obviously has a blind spot, and Sophia is apparently willing to ironically somewhat grill Emma on her hypocrisy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope this backfires on them in the most agonizing way possible. “Nod, nod” |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really really hope taylor kills Emma Sophia and Maddison. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It seems like you are trying to make them relatable, and it is working, then they say something like Emma did to screw it up. Good job keeping things in perspective. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the chapter _. |