| Reviews for Snapped Wrist, Broken Lies |
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   geekqueen2010 chapter 1 . 7/14 I'd pay damn good money to see Marinette break Gabriel's wrist and he end up being the one in trouble! Please make a sequel one-shot! |
| Alyce Reide chapter 1 . 6/14 Little 'helpful' comments like those make my day! I love how that was just Mari's last straw. I like the little bit at the beginning about how...mmm...drastic things can get in Mari's mind. Oh, and your grammar is like a breath of fresh air. I've been reading too much fanfiction by people who could use a refresher course there. |
| Miraculous4life chapter 1 . 6/12 Haha! I guess Lila was a practice target for Marinette! Hawkmoth is the real deal! |
| Hkt29 chapter 1 . 5/14 Great fic. If adults only had a bit more common sense in canon... |
| violet lilaccs chapter 1 . 5/11 :D |
| Greenwiz34 chapter 1 . 4/22 Great job on this! I realize this is probably poor form, but since I can't post comments to other comments directly, here we are... I would LOVE to see saberstorm's suggestion for a Hawkmoth followup-type story brought to life! |
| Shiranai Atsune chapter 1 . 4/15 This is amazing! Getting to break Lila's wrist and reveal her lies? YES! |
| Silvanon of the Orchard chapter 1 . 4/15 I love it! |
| Swirlspot chapter 1 . 4/15 I'm really surprised that Marinette didn't get in more trouble, even if it was an accident. Schools these days are rather strict about bullies and injuries. Then again, this is Dupont we're talking about... |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/12 This was awesome! And just in time for adrienette April! Plz make more. I love thing like this! G. P. |
| saberstorm chapter 1 . 4/14 Three days later: Gabriel accidentally pokes himself too hard in the mouth with a fork, and gets an infection. With his mouth so swollen, he's barely able to talk, and his mispronunciations cause problems with his Akumas. After all, "Foamy Heather" is quite different from "Stormy Weather". |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/11 Great story! I m glad Adrien at laest made some effort to save Marinette. |
| Lady Dominator chapter 1 . 4/13 Noice |
| Agent N chapter 1 . 4/10 This...does put a smile on my face. |
| GodlyJewel chapter 1 . 4/12 Haha okay, yes, this would be perfect! Seriously, how has it that no one has seen past her? I mean, come on! The lies are so OBVIOUS! Then again, this is how a manipulator works. Classic dictum approach: look like the weakened/abused party and everyone wants to help. I swear, if they could just get the mom in there, then she could be found out. I still don't get how they don't have any doctor's notes on file? Also how are they not getting calls sent to her mom? So yeah, really wish your story was cannon. Such a fun idea for how to bring down the liar. |
